Puzzle Pieces

Hey!

Thanks for requesting a review! I definitely enjoy your work! You are a very talented writer!
There should be a semi-colon after disappeared instead of a comma. There should be a period after broken. There should be a semi-colon after fake instead of a comma. There should be a comma after you never liked me instead of a period. There shouldn't be a period after the second to last line. These were just a few grammatical things I would personal change. Yay, I was finally able to be helpful.

Once again, I think you have created a beautiful piece of work! If you need anything feel free to ask,
Rascalover

Heyyy, I'm here to review! Okay, so first I want to say, this poem is really nice. It's something a lot of people could most likely relate to sometime in their life. I really liked the beginning of the poem because it flowed really nicely, and it was easy to read and to understand. I'm sorry I really can't think of critique for this thing, ahahahaha. I really loved the ending, it didn't rhyme, but it just made it more powerful. This poem was amazing and brilliant, and I definitely could not have wrote this. You are really good at writing poems from what I've seen. Just in my opinion, this was one of your best. Anyways, AMAZINGGGG POEMMMM.


~CAKEEEEEEEEEEEEE~

*Offers a cinnamon pretzel*

Hey there, Bellarke!!

This is Eros here with a review for this beautiful piece of poetry of yours!!

I have seen you here around often and I think, I should start following you... Especially after reading this poem...

Let's begin the review with the title of the poem. The title of the poem is very attractive, catchy, related to the poem and very apt and appropriate. These are the characteristics of a good title and I am glad to say that you have satisfied all the above criterias!

So let's dive into the meaning of the poem, first. The meaning of the poem is very emotional and deeply painful. I could relate myself with it and I could actually feel the pain as I read it.
One like for this from me!
I really loved the way you have compared your heart with the broken pieces of the puzzle. It is so much true ...it really does feels that way, and you have put the feelings into words so well.

I especially loved the last line that asks for someone to please love and take care of me as I can not do it by myself. I could again relate this with myself. And that makes me feel so ewhat lonely actually-- I mean it is my personal feeling, that occurs to me when I feel the need of someone to ...like hug me or something, it doesn't matter if you intended it or not.

Then the choice of set of the words was awesome and I really loved your style of writing, which is easy to understand and so beautiful and unique again. The poem is beautiful I would really love to read your old works that you have published. But time is not permitting me to do it, Because of exams and stuff, so I won't promise you that I will review them. But I am really influenced by this poem.

Keep writing such awesome poetries and other stuff and we would love to keep reading them and reviewing them!!
Have a great day / night!

With love,
From Eros.

So sad!!

Awesome poem!