One word
that makes my heart stop.
Two syllables
that make my heart go crazy.
A name
that brings a smile to my face.
A laugh
that makes me want to keep you for myself.
A smile
that makes me want to capture every moment.
The only person
that I want to love.
You hold
the key to my heart in your hand.
I am
a whole human again with you.
You fixed
my broken pieces.
You are
my love.
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Hello Bellaire
Another great poem, its wonderful. I can practically feel the emotion in this poem.
All the love and hope, happiness
Its a great feeling to be in love with someone💕
I like the topic of the poem. Its very creative but also captures the readers attention.
It has a very important setting and meaning, I feel.
There doesn't seem to be any spelling errors, or any capitalization issues. This is a perfect poem in my opinion, and also one of my favorites.
I hope to read more of your work!!
Your friend Anma
Hi it’s Princess here to review a poem that’s so good I don’t even know how to review it.
I love this poem so much - it’s just so amazing!
I do have one very tiny comment though...
“The only person
that I want to love.”
In every other section the first line is two words, but this is three. I think this breaks the flow of the poem. Obviously it’s up to you to decide, though.
Aside from that I absolutely love the entire poem! Keep up the amazing work!
This is a mind-blowing poem that I can't write better. I really like how you use those short little two lines as their stanzas because that's really creative.
What I notice is that only one of your lines had a comma before the second line, I think you should either remove that comma or put all commas in the poem.
Besides that there is no other feedback I can give you, because this seems to be well structured and has a great flow. Great job.
Thank you!!
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told you it wasn't bad...
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Bell,
THIS IS JAW DROPPING. I LOVED IT!!!
<3
Nothing would be changed, it's perfect. I'm legit speechless..
awwwe
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