Hi there Carla here for a review.
This poem is so short but yet has so many emotions to it.
I really like the layout of this poem, it is different but quite funky, I like it.
I really like the rhyming scheme, it fit wells with the title of the poem.
I really like the ending
"I am now unknown" so many people feel this emotion and are afraid to tell someone about it.
I also like how the last 2 lines have the ... after them to show the reader that either the writer hasn't finished his sentence or that he/she is hesitant
If you disagree with any of this please comment
Over and out.
Points: 607
Reviews: 18
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