This poem is amazing. It's so good. It expresses many feelings that people may get By relationship. This is a piece of art.
All the lies you say,
is pushing me away.
When you set this line it make me sad a bit, and that's totally what you have to have in a good poem, feelings. Awesome job.
I can see it in your eyes
and it makes me want to yell.
You tell me you don't
but I can see that you do.
This part was my favorite part good job.
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