Young Writers Society

Hiya! IT'S REVIEW TIME! I think your poem was excellent and illustrated true friendship and i'm sure Madison enjoyed it. Great last line XD. I think your poem was really good and you must be really good friends with Madison to write such depths about friendship. I hope Madison likes your nice poem, goodbye, PEACE OUT, and write many more poems.

Love it!!!

Hi Shikora here to leave a review.

I really do think this poem will make your friend feel a lot better. It's nice to no that you think about her and want to make her feel better. I like it that your lines weren't to long, and they all seemed to just mix with one another. Making it a smooth read. Its also nice reading this, because I can feel the way you feel when you wrote this. So yes I think it will make your friend feel a lot better.
I do think that you should put full stops at the end of each line, or a comma. But that is your choice.
I really liked reading this poem, never stop wring and have a great day/night.

Your friend
Shikora.

Sophie here for a quick review!
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This is super cute and caring and i bet your friend will love it!
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M-this part is super selfless and i love it
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A-this is a nice background piece of how good your friendship is
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D-this is kinda like a plea almost like a please i need you
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I- this is such a cute line that's pulling in "do it for me" vibes
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S-ooooooo the good friendship in this is so cute
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O-SAY IT AGAIN FOR THE FOLKS IN THE BACK
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N-this is by far my favorite line in this because it shows friendship in that last statement. the i would do anything for you.i love this
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overall-i love this. its the definition of friendship. good job and write on!

@questfinder33....