Young Writers Society

*Slides in* Hello! Let's get right into this review!

When I saw the title, I had to read it. It sort of called to me. Maybe it's because I never take anything seriously.

Not gonna lie, this was hilarious. Not often do I see a poem with humorous purposes! This was sort of a fresh breath of air because I normally review serious, depressing poems. Not anything wrong with them, though!

I did notice one thing, you rhymed in some parts of the poems, and in some parts, you did not. I don't know if that was intentional because this is a humorous poem, but I just wanted to point it out.

Anyways, I don't have much else to say, but amazing job, still laughing!

*Slides away*

Hi,

I am still laughing. Nice humoristic poem. I loved the starting of the poem. The way you took it high. The length of the poem is good. Although length doesn't matter but I counted. You used vocabulary in god sense. I loved the lines you picked. Those lines were good. I sensed while reading that you felt this poem very well. I loved it while reading. What a good piece of work.

I hope to read further. Keep writing.