Can't we just be,
And agree to disagree
That our love's forever;
And our hearts won't sever?
Can't I just stay
Another fateful day,
And pretend all's well?
To them I'll never tell.
Can't we just love
Without looking above
At all ours doubts,
And take different routes?
Can't you just hold me,
And finally agree...
That it's worth it
And just hold me a bit?
Points:
Time spent:
IP address:
Canary word: Present
Possible AI signals:
Original Text:
Are you sure you want to delete this comment? This cannot be undone.
Mark this comment as a review? Points will be awarded to the poster.
Your comment was posted, but it wasn’t long enough to count as a review. Reviews need about four complete sentences (at least 250 characters). Try writing another review that explains your thoughts in more detail — the author will appreciate it, and you’ll earn points for it.
140,222 Literary Works • 673,046 Reviews
Love the punctuation and the flow of it.
Short, sweet, and too the point.
Keep up the good work.
Thanks don't forget to click the like button.
Hi there!
I really liked your poem, I found it touching and cute. Well done! Keep up the good work!
Hey! I am here to review your poem!
Wow. I really enjoyed this. The spelling, the punctuation is perfect! Very well written. I think people will enjoy this, as they can relate to it. It's short and snappy. But I think it ends a little blunt. The last line, doesn't sound as good as the rest. Other than that everything is absolutely amazing! It's cute, and warming. Well done, amazing poem! Keep up the good work!
-Ronan
Thanks, I'm glad you think so!
Hi there!
I really liked your poem, I found it touching and cute. Well done! Keep up the good work!
Thanks don't forget to click the "like" button.
Hey!
I really, really loved this! The first two lines were phenomenal! I related a lot to it, even though I've never dated before. I feel like this can also work with friendships and I've had a ton of awful ones. I found that the last line didn't sound as nice as the rest of the poem. I don't really like the 'a bit' part.
Other than that, I loved this poem! (I've said that quite a lot haven't I? xD )
Alice
I'm glad you enjoyed it, Alice. Don't forget to click the "like" button.
Right sorry xD
No prob. I always have to remind people. Hahaha