Daniel14 here for a review.
I really loved the way you have written the first two lines that says "Look to the sun, my dear,
When darkness follows you." These word used here by you has inspired me and gives me a strength to look forward in a positive way at all the problems that come ahead. The way you have used each word in this poem fills me with a contentment of all the inner feelings and words that i want to say out. These word used here are worth a billion and more for me. Just got to say that i loved your poem. Keep writing and keep inspiring
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