From the shadows,
It feeds on those who fear.
It breaks the hearts of many,
And takes all you hold dear.
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From the shadows,
He watches you day and night,
Waiting till you fall asleep
Then devouring you without a fight.
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From the shadows,
He chants your name.
Marking your definite end.
Run... you're the one to blame.
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Good job. I like your poems because they're more on the shorter side, I get bored when reading really long poetry.
Thanks!
Hi, J here for a review.
I like this poem and I'm not sure you meant to do this but it feels like you were writing directly to a wide range of subjects, if you know what I mean.
Someone with depression could view it as their unhappiness, someone with anxiety could as a panic attack @me,someone who is being bullied could view it as their attacker. I'm not sure you meant for this to happen but it is a really good message and an even better, well-written poem. Over all good job and if you would like PM me with your intents for the view on this poem. Sorry for the mistakes i cannot backspace on my computer right now and its messing me up;)
Good Job and Keep Writing!!
Thanks for your review! I meant for it to be interpreted by the reader, yes.
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*feels chills down spine* So scary... I really love this! It's a really scary and suspenseful piece of poetry, but also enigmatic, because of the last line. However, it's a bit confusing, because the 'monster' suddenly changes from an 'it' to a 'he', which can be interpreted in multiple ways. Overall, amazing!!
I glad you liked it!
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