hey there!
well that was definetly beautiful. There are so many poems around here on summers, but this was seriously incredible. I really -really- cant find a single mistake ( not that I'm very good at nitpicking). I loved the way your poem flows. the rhyme scheme is just perfect.
And yeah i completly agree to the fact that summer is a beautiful time.
so yeah i guess i covered everything i wanted to say.
great job!
fangirl~
P.S.- I loved the way you ended the poem.
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