Beautiful and so heartbreaking. I liked the line "I find myself on my knees" - which I interpret as sometimes that the only thing a person can do is pray for things to get better
"Why does the world blame me For my human weaknesses?" The world can be a harsh place to live in. It's nice to have a gentle reminder (such as this beautiful poem) that we are all flawed and need to be patient with one another.
I saw no mistakes I this piece. Then again I'm no poet. Keep writing!
-Shieldmaiden
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