Hey EverLight! So I’m not going to be able to give you any advice or anything because I know nothing about poetry but I’ll give you my thoughts on it!
I really like the moral of this piece. I’m not sure if what I got out of it is what you meant or not but it is really good! I find it uplifting and realistic at the same time. Which is hard to come by because reality is rarely uplifting.
I also really liked the format as amara_rae_15 pointed out. It really just grabbed my attention that this is about THE HEART! Very well done
Your friend,
Honora <3
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