I loved how the innocents just smashed through this poem. Very powerful and brought a warm fuzzy feeling inside me. Made me want to go back to my childhood.
Not everything’s fine
Not everything’s alright
But that’s not going to stop you
From having the time of your life
To me these lines were the most powerful within this poem. To me it was almost like a lullaby in a way.
I loved the emotion felt in this poem and had me smiling all the way through. I loved how happy-go-lucky the poem was. It was unlike anything I have ever seen. Fantastic job you've done here.
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