Oh thank goodness! I like that you specify your rhyme pattern in the description. And you have really great rhythm. I've read so many poems who have no rhyme nor rhythm. That's not a poem, that's rambling. Of course there is freestyle, where rhyme doesn't matter, but rhythm is absolutely essential. And now I'm rambling.
Anyway, your poem sends a very clear message and it makes complete sense. Some of the other poems I've read on this sight have been very confusing because the poets responsible attempted to sound smart by using big words that really do not fit in context. You, however, seem to be experienced enough to avoid this. Your poem was easy to understand, smooth and easy to read, and exceptionally pleasant. It just sounds nice and beautiful. Your use of tone and mood are fantastic and add to the poem immensely.
Thanks for allowing me to read your work. I really enjoyed it! Keep writing and stay gold!
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