reindeer
are
just
christmas
llamas.
they
go
buh-waaaaaaaaa
and
have
huge
f l u f f y
personal
sweaters.
i
wanna
be
a
reindeer.
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Well it's certainly nonsensical. I can say that much, that's for sure. Though I don't really know what it's trying to convey. As in, I don't much understand its meaning. Poetry doesn't have to carry serious topics, of course, but even then, it seems a bit... Odd.
All I can point out is the use of "i," which should be capitalized in English when referring to oneself. That, and sentences should start with capital letters anyway. Other than that, the grammar and syntax seem to be in order.
So that's that, really... I can't judge it properly, it's much too short for any distinct flaws to surface. It didn't really invoke much in the way of emotions in me.
Don't take this as a poor review though. Just my personal feelings on it. Keep at it.
it wasn't meant to have any meaning or sense in it, everything was just random and it was meant to be exactly at it was published, no caps, no real sentences, no judging, just plain humor
In that case, full steam ahead!
Thanks for sharing this humorous poem. The funny part that I find is the imitation of how reindeer sound. I personally have never heard how a reindeer sounds. But the way you write that it sounds looks very convincing. Does a llama sound that way as well? That I don't know either but its face looks as if it makes that kind of sound. Also comical is that the speaker gives the impression that he can't tell the difference between these two animals.
Even more hilarious yet is that he wants to be one of these two animals!
As for suggestions? Well, I really don't have any. Poem is funny as it is.
"He"? the speaker is me... "she". but thank you for the funny comment haha
Sorry about that. They should place one of those gender symbols next to the name so one knows the gender. I hope I didn't offend by saying that the poem is humorous. I honestly thought that the intention was humor.
My apologies if I did.