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I really liked this!! Not much of a poetry person, but this was interesting and I could really relate to it. Your simile with the forehead like the crinkled notebook paper was really creative. I think you're really talented
I really like this a lot
and I love the name, for what ever reason it really drew me in. I like the voice in this very much. It sounds very honest. I've always enjoyed this kind of poetry- simple, with a deep meaning many can relate to. Bravo! 
I liked your poem
I really like your poem. When it talked about the forehead, I completely understood it. I especially like that your poem does not talk about the good things of getting older but of what you do not look for when you are older. I also like your simile about the wrinkles on your face resemble tribe marks. I hope to read more of your work.
I like poetry like this. It's not angsty, just poignant and thoughtful. So much better than the "Black heart, blah blah, dark raven, blah blah, abyss" crap, you know what I mean? Shows a lot of actual skill too. I'm quite impressed.
Congratulations on a decent poem, friend