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Lol jk.
But this is verrry deep.
I think it's awesome.
It shows how much you care and love him no matter what his disabilty is!
And that my friend makes you a good person.
Thanks simplycomplex, I always find your advice really helpful.
Aw, I really like this! I only spotted a few things that I would change.
In this line, a would put either "I see a spirit, unpredictable," or "I see an unpredictable spirit,".
The second line in red I think would sound better if you put "I won't doubt you".
I love the ending and the whole poem is wonderful.
Great work!
i love how this is a poem but also like a letter. it helps show your emotions