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Communication without words,..
This is interesting, i like your piece,..
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Wow, I really liked this! Beautiful and terrific quality

I enjoyed how you numbered the stanzas with Roman numerals. It gave it a bit of a "short vignettes" feeling, if that makes sense. Like short snapshots in a film, showing different scenes that make up one larger scene of emotion.
Just so perfect. You should submit this to a publication
There's a lot more I'd like to say about this poem, but I can't find the words ... :')
awwww, this is so sweet... I love it... keep writing and keep up the good work.