Hello there, @StoryWeaver13! Though you'll likely never see this, it's Squire Vilnius here with a review!
I really like this short poem you've crafted here! You've excelled at describing how you wish to feel emotionally with traveling day to day.
I think that you could do some improvement on your rhymes. There are just a handful in the entire poem, but I feel that the rhymes improve the overall structure that you've created here.
There are no obvious grammatical errors that I can see in this poem.
Have a nice [*insert time of day here*]!!!
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