Young Writers Society

Aw Forest that was soooo sweet!!! I thik it's awesome and you did a great job!!! captain.classy is one lucky YWSer! (why am I laughing...?) Great job!!! Talk to you soon!!

The poem was really sweet. I could find no lines or words that had any mistakes. Keep it up!

Awwww Forest thats so sweet! Awesome job!

Of course! She may need that info for another poem! Anything I can do to help other writers.
Hey, I guess YWS has taught me well!

LOL! You kids are crazy! And of course, it amuses me that captain.classy gives a full review... of course! YWS has trained you well.

One thing:

She praised my poems
Made me feel special
And loved

I would like to see more details on this! This is very, very vague. I could write this about anybody and not really think about it. Now, to be specific... that's the challenge.

Cute poem, lol.

Ahh forest I love you! Here I go!

Forestqueen808 wrote:
“I’ll be your friend,” she said#FF0000 ">,
That captain I met#FF0000 ">.
“I’ve got your back” she told me#FF0000 ">,
And never let me cry#FF0000 ">. #BF0000 ">I also think you should say this line in quotes too. "I'll never let you cry." I think it would sound better that way.
She praised my poems
#FF0000 ">andMade me feel special#800000 ">I think there should be an and here. Or, at least a comma.
And loved

Though she should know#800000 ">I don't think though fits in here.
Her words mean more to me
Then the praise hidden within them#FF0000 ">.#800000 ">They really do! <3
To know that she is my friend
Is the greatest gift of all

Our captain.classy#800000 ">My favorite part!