Young Writers Society

Usually I put one section of the poem that i like most. This one just has too many. I would have to put the whole poem on my review to do that. This poem is so full of hope and dreams. I love poems like this, this is a great one.

And in that wish I wished a thousand more-
A string of dreams, I said, a wishing rope,

I'd say that is one of the best of the best sections. Great poem.
Keep it up!

Hi there Cailey,have a good day!
So here I'm to make review on your wonderful poem:)

I really love the theme you bring here in your poem.It is about hope and dreams that you are 'wish to make a wish for hope'.

_I made a wish to wish upon a hope,
And in that wish I wished a thousand more-
A string of dreams, I said, a wishing rope,
To which I tied my longings kept in store.
*Here is my favourate stanza which every lines is so fantastic to me.The way you use methaphor to represent hope and dreams,but there is some u kept it in store.

#The second stanza is also beautiful to read,but the second line make me confuse for a while:

"A wish too big for wishing bones and wells, "
*Its takes time for me to understand the real meaning is.

Overall,actually you have a good poem here with your own message you want the reader to see.
*I made a wish to wish upon a hope,
A now I wish to make a wish for hope.-Your poem ended with such a nice two line just enough to make working as a great poem!

Keep writing and I hope to see more masterpieces from you soon in YWS.Good job!
Thank you:)Cheer

Hi there Cailey,have a good day!
So here I'm to make review on your wonderful poem:)

I really love the theme you bring here in your poem.It is about hope and dreams that you are 'wish to make a wish for hope'.

_I made a wish to wish upon a hope,
And in that wish I wished a thousand more-
A string of dreams, I said, a wishing rope,
To which I tied my longings kept in store.
*Here is my favourate stanza which every lines is so fantastic to me.The way you use methaphor to represent hope and dreams,but there is some u kept it in store.

#The second stanza is also beautiful to read,but the second line make me confuse for a while:

"A wish too big for wishing bones and wells, "
*Its takes time for me to understand the real meaning is.

Overall,actually you have a good poem here with your own message you want the reader to see.
*I made a wish to wish upon a hope,
A now I wish to make a wish for hope.-Your poem ended with such a nice two line just enough to make working as a great poem!

Keep writing and I hope to see more masterpieces from you soon in YWS.Good job!
Thank you:)Cheer

Hello there! I'm not much of a poetry reviewer anymore but I'll try my best.

This a very sweet poem. It brings a sense of magic in my mind, with all this talk of wishing and shooting stars.
The first and last stanzas were my favourite.

I made a wish to wish upon a hope,
And in that wish I wished a thousand more-
A string of dreams, I said, a wishing rope,
To which I tied my longings kept in store

I made a wish to wish upon a hope,
A now I wish to make a wish for hope.

Nice poem here, A few things I have t say as part of a review.

I made a wish to wish upon a hope,

A wish too big for wishing bones and wells,

I made a wish to wish upon a hope,
and in that wish I wished a thousand more-
A string of dreams, I said, a wishing rope,
to which I tied my longings kept in store.

I made a wish to wish upon a hope,
A now I wish to make a wish for hope.

Hi,

This poem is pretty good, and as a whole I don't have much to say about it. While the topic that you're writing about may not be the most original, it doesn't feel cliche; you certainly make it your one. You have some really fantastic imagery.

I think the repetition of "wish" helps, although it can be a little bit of a mouthful. While I realize that this is a sonnet and you're limited in the words that you can use, try to think of synonyms and other words that you can use instead. I would also try to go into a little bit more detail about what exactly this wish is. Also, for your rhymed couplet at the end, it generally works better if they're two different words that rhyme.

Good work with this! Feel free to give me a shout if you have any questions.

Wow. This was a bit of a tongue twister.

Well, this was well thought. You can tell when somebody actually thought about what they wrote, rather than just going along. ( Like me) You did an excellent job at this! I kinda saw it at a kids perspective, because, well, only a kid would think like this. To make a wish that would last a thousands years, well, that would be something that a kid would wish! I hope that you write more in the future, miss.

With All Do Respect
Wholesomereader