Yeah, I got glasses,
Go ahead,
Call me four-eyes;
I dare you.
What's on my teeth?
Oh, okay
You're going to
Say brace-face, too?
My inhaler means nothing;
I'm just sick,
A lot of kids are.
I can breath.
It isn't weird
To miss school;
I have good reasons
For not liking summer.
Well, I know
I'm not the only kid
Who writes for fun!
I bet you do, too.
See? I'm normal...
Well, maybe.
I'm not a nerd,
Am I?
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This is a very nice poem, and it is easy to relate to, minus inhaler, but I must say, if this is true, EMBRACE YOUR INNER NERD! Nerd is a high up rank, not an insult. The last line is kinda funny, as is the last verse, with humourous self nerdenial. (A combination of nerd and denial. ) Truly very easy to relate to too.
Hi! I love this poem, it descibes well exactly what people may see as a nerd. I like how you've captured that. I'd only suggest minor changes.
For the glasses part you could have mentioned how wearing glasses doesn't make you blind or something, just for a bit more humour, otherwise it's fine.
I'd also make a suggestion to add more nerd stereotypes to your poem, e.g. reading books, liking the library, being smart, being unpopular, dressing smart ....etc.
Overall good poem!
-Infinity x
Hm, I think I might just go and rewrite this with more stereotypes. Although, I don't have braces anymore..
Haaa I LOVE IT
that really made me smile i have braces and do happen to miss school 
haha yeah most people would describe that as a nerd. I hate the word nerd and stereotypes but putting that aside it's a good poem. Please tell me you don't miss school.
I am a nerd, but I don't have any of the "nerdy" stereotypness,so okay, I love this so much!!! Your poem is awesome!! It was dunny, too!!
All the classic signs of nerdism!
I wish i had some of these traits, but none-the-less I am a nerd
i quite like this form, structure ect. The regular stanza's I feel emphasise the point of it, somehow.
And in answer to the question on the bottom, Yes, yes you are a nerd! But 'tis very good.
i think, however, that you could add more traits perhaps? 'tis a thought.
If you have any questions or a more in depth review, leave me a message and i shall get right on it
~Retro Disco666