I'm a writer, aren't I?
So why...
why
did I take Calculus?
AP; since the normal
wasn't hard enough.Now,And I don't get it.AndIt's only been a week.
I'm failing,
and the class hasn't
really
even
started.
I really like this part in bold. It flows well and when I read it, I can hear the agitation and frustration in the reader's voice.
I'm a writer.
Not a mathmatician.
Not a scientist.
A writer.
I feel like this part of the poem would be more effective if you write it in choppy lines. Written this way, it sounds the way someone would say it out loud.
So why did I take calculus?
This is a funny poem. I feel this way about most science and math classes I take. It feels like a waste of my time. And then I end up getting bad grades and everything.
Overall it's a good poem. The suggestions I gave make the poem flow better and sound realistic. You can take them or leave them, I really don't care.
Keep writing!
**Noelle**
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