Hello 
I would like to start by letting you know that was a beautifully written piece and I enjoyed looking through it very much. I feel like it is a relateable topic, which made it so much more desirable to read. I am glad that I clicked on it because I was NOT disappointed. So with that being said, here are a few things that I found while reading
"The exit signs are glowing
Drivers are racing by
But I slow drive and I take my time
Cause it'll be a long night"\-----to me, this just seemed a little out of place compared to the stanzas before it, but that may have just been the way I was reading it to myself in my head, so I wouldn't worry about it too much. Also, I assume you meant to write "but I slowly drive and take my time" because I think that works better but its okay, its only a simple mistake
Overall, I don't want to be repetitive , but everything I said in my first paragraph was 100% true. This was beautifully done and stirs emotion from people, which every good writer should aspire to do. I truly look forward to reading more of your poems or other forms of writing because this has made my night, it is so well done.
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