Godot

I think this kind of has a mysterious void-like feel to it. Like, you don't know who these people are-- BUT THAT'S OKAY!! I think it really adds to it, making the reader think, "Who is this Godot?"
I'm not sure if you have another story/poem that talks about Godot.. but for people who haven't read that(if it exists), and who read this can feel that same mystery.
I think this is a very thoughtful piece, and I really like it.
I also get the feel of loneliness from this poem, like.. Godot isn't coming, and now the feeling of rejection comes in. I really like that. Feeling betrayed, even.
I'm still new to literacy, but I really, really, REALLY like this!

Nice poem, Dr Strangelove. I read Beckett. I know perfectly well what you're talking about.

I like your work. It's fun but I don't understand who Godot is or who this person is.I'm not even sure who the narrator is or what exactly is going on.. I like the suspense though and the way you write.
It's good work. Keep it up. "still have yet to show up" I think should be "you are still yet to show up" or "having yet to show up" or whatever. That line is a bit confusing.
I like it though.

Hi there,
Although I know less about what 'Godot' is, but it is still interesting to read.

No one knows who or what Godot actually is, and no one will ever know.
(Excerpt from play)
ESTRAGON: Let's go.
VLADIMIR: We can't.
ESTRAGON: Why not?
VLADIMIR: We're waiting for Godot.
~C.p from Urban dic.

Been waiting for a while,
Why haven't you come?
I can't stay here the whole time,
This isn't fun.