Just a quick review!
I like the uniqueness of all your works. You quite literally turn cliches on their head. This poem is no different. It is fast paced, random and completely fresh in terms on concept. I do how ever agree that satires generally have a deeper message to talk about, so I am not quite sure how much of a satire this was.
It is pointless to talk about grammar for poetry, but here it did act like speed bumps, because the structuring was not consistent. It didn't however harm the overall poem as such. What I like about all of your works is, I can read all of them in one go! They almost never bore me. So yeah it's a fun read. Keep writing!
Points: 74
Reviews: 134
Donate