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Sat Jun 29, 2013 12:03 pm
Jonathan says...



Okay thanks. :D
There seems to be nothing written here. :shock:
  





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Sun Jun 30, 2013 1:32 am
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Approaching that late morning where shall be shed the blood and tears of all grammatical and semantic inconsistency, here stands squire Skorlir, preparing for the march.


Knighthood:
Spoiler! :
The first foe shall soon fall.
1.Never Looked Back

And, that there should be one to follow the first, another must go, to share the honor of review per sought knighthood.
2.Sleeping Beauty

And another. For two, while a couple, is simply not enough.
3.To...

Three, not enough spokes to fill the wheel of poetic power awaiting inclusion on my future knight's chariot of justice.
4. Beach Revised 1

Ah, but one wheel shall not suffice. Two, and beams more, to build a worthy vehicle of war.
5. Dancing Eyes

Another spoke! Like the spear I struck through the very artichoke's heart of crude but potentially excellent work!
6. Florida

Six deserves a seventh, a brother for the long turns of REVIEWED and CONQUERED servitude under a squire-to-become-a-knight.
7. I'm not a pessimist, I'm a grown-up

But ah! One foe sputters yet! I must redouble its fate's deliverance, that it might transcend its gentle weakness and become yet great and potent!
8.Beach Revised 1

What contraption is this? I must defeat it, teach it, berate it, make it an ally to the cause, incontrovertibly correcting its minor flaws.
9.machines

Great lord, what redemption I have here acclaimed, to both myself and those defeated on the page! The proximity to knighthood shall agitate this great thirst for its gain!

For the final stricken foe, to be turned ally in the throes; squire skorlir lays the last blow.
10.Fairytale Molestation


Aha! Soon to be a knight indeed!

Although not technically yet knighted, this squire should not stop his plunder of the green room when there are still treasures to be had!

Whatever comes after Knighthood:

I can has sward?


Shield to go with mah sward:


(Does 20 mean something special - something shiny, even? ~__~ Awa! I see; a shield! That is shiny indeed.)

21. (Need a title)-Chapter One~Part One.

22. (Need a name)-Chapter One~Part Two.

23. Identical: Chapter Three - Reactivity
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 2:34 am
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ShadowHunter says...



Squire Shadow, ready for battle!



I did it! (: I shall now be known as Knight Shadow!

For my sword!

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Meshugenah says...



Ok, despite how embarrassingly long this may take me... squire Mesh ready and willing!

1. Windows - Part 1 of 2
2. Windows - Part 2 of 2
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***Under the Responsibility of S.P.E.W.***
(Sadistic Perplexion of Everyone's Wits)

Medieval Lit! Come here to find out who Chaucer plagiarized and translated - and why and how it worked in the late 1300s.

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Iggy says...



Green room reviews:

Spoiler! :
1. Mortals and Demigods
2. Of Expectations and Fluctuations
3. Scatty Cat - The Final Chapter
4. Savior
5. Chaos in Liberton
6. Her - this piece I was reviewing, but two people got to it before I could finish my review, so isn't there an award for that? ;)
7. Lunar Blaze Chapter one, a Dark Visitor
8. The Dark Knight review
9. Chasing Somewhere - Chapter Two
10. The Charm of Deception - Prologue
11. The Charm of Deception - Chapter One, Part One
12. Frozen
13. Don't Take The Highway
14. The Train and the Girl in the Cardinal Dress
15. Trains
16. Midas
17. Dirty Little Secret
18. Savior
19. Her
20. The Boy Who Broke Mirrors (C.6)
21. Fly away <-- Niteowl is a Knight, yes? A Fellow In Arms trophy, please!
22. She Is Not Hungry
23. What Makes You Feel Orange
24. Find Judy
25. The Diary of a Cat Fanatic Ch. 2
26. Guilty of Being innocent
27. Games in Our School [Essay]
28. On The Other Side
29. If My Breath Stops
30. Sister once close to me, why can't we once be?
31. Purple Lava Lamp
32. The lives they lived
33. Legal Meets Illegal ~ Summary
34. Legal Meets Illegal ~ Introduction
35. Legal Meets Illegal - Ch. 1
36. Jarrett the Ferret and Anna Banana
37. Well, somebodys done their homework...
38. A Lord's Bane Ch. 2 Pt. 1
39. Surviving You
40. A short story based on the song Safe and Sound - Taylor Swift ft. The Civil Wars
41. Elegy of Flight: Chapter Two (Elegie)
42. The Snowman
43. I'll Face Myself
44. Fly
45. No More Apologies
46. Life Moves On
47. Your Words Will Change The World
48. Mourning after
49. Taking Flight (Part Two)
50. Taking Flight (Part Three)
51. New Face of Humanity
52. Dreamt?Great.. Now go do it!
53. Pokemon Diamond Destinies: Ch. 1 Pt. 1
54. Days of Gold Gone By: Ep. 3
55. Days of Gold Gone By: Ep. 4



I FINALLY DID IT. ;D

Knight Iggy. I like it. Soon, I shall be QUEEN.
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 5:35 am
StoneHeart says...



Nice Iggy! I had the same thing happen with one of my reviews >>

It was you and Ego actually who got to it first >>>
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I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jun 30, 2013 9:26 am
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One morning, in the crunching cold, Knight Rydia rode out across her lands to survey the peace-keeping at the village Fairdale.

However, all was not well.

A great sadness had come across the people for the winter was mightily cold and food was scarce to be had. There were broils in the streets and one man challenged his neighbour to a duel over the price of a loaf of bread.

Knight Rydia was greatly saddened, but as she begun to dismount, she paused and stayed her foot, for sprouting out of the barren land was a single flower. The knight dismounted more carefully and gently plucked the bloom from the ground.

As the Knight passed through her village of Fairvale, the fighting stopped in the streets and the people turned with wearied cheers and hollow eyes. Knight Rydia rode solemnly to the village green and here she planted the flower with great care and great sadness and as she rose, the flower shone and not an eye could be drawn away.

Beneath the flower, the ground was made green again and the life spread through the village, drawing trees from their long sleep and flowers from their graves. The wave of life spread further and further, until it reached the outer-fields, where the crops wriggled free of the dust and the dirt and stood proud.

The people rejoiced again for they had been saved, but they were humbled by the atrocity of their actions and the beautiful caring of their Lady saviour. From this day on, the people of Fairvale vowed to live by the flower and not by the lance.

Knight Rydia would like a 'Lance' please!
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 10:05 am
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Auxiira says...



Knight Auxii has no inspiration for a short story, but has now obtained a horse and called it "Squirrel". She has also renamed her sword "Stick, her shield "Bark" and her helm "Acorn".
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 12:36 pm
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Hannah says...



Awesome work, Knights and Squires.
Just to let you know, this thread will be updated once review day ends. If you receive a like on your post by either Pingu or myself, that'll let you know the update's been taken care of! Review on!
you can message me with anything: questions, review requests, rants
are you a green room knight yet?
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 3:11 pm
StoneHeart says...



Er, Hannah? I want to get my 'hamlet', but it's practically impossible to get it . . . Can, say, part of the reviews be green room? At least.

Also, can the reviews for a hamlet count for the reviews for say, a helmet, as well?
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jun 30, 2013 3:12 pm
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StoneHeart says...



A Green Girdle: Alice in Wonderland 2010 film review

Ego AND iggy took it!
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Sun Jun 30, 2013 3:17 pm
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Hannah says...



Sorry, Knight Black. It's not impossible, and thus the rules can't be changed. Of course, all reviews you do in the Green Room count to your number count and toward your helmet and overall count. (:
you can message me with anything: questions, review requests, rants
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Sun Jun 30, 2013 4:46 pm
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Auxiira says...



By the way:

WE HAVE DEFEATED THE GREEN ROOM ONCE AGAIN!
You read faster than Usaine Bolt sprints xD - Deanie 2014

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Sun Jun 30, 2013 6:21 pm
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StoneHeart says...



If you look back at the top post on page 20 you'll see that I won myself a suit of armor :P
For I who am poor have only my dreams
I spread my dreams under your feet . . .

. . . tread softly for you tread on my dreams.


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Audy says...



Haha, this review day was a fierce battle that brought a plentiful harvest ;)

Knight Audster returns with a horse and full bodied armor! Woohoo! No more spiderman bandages and scabby feet!

And fellow in arms? I think so.
  








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