Hello Night, Vivian here. I liked your poem it's very dramatic, like Romeo and Juliet the ending anyway.
I like the theme since fairy tales always had a deeper story and darker meaning. Your words say sleeping beauty is dead but she still dreams and screams. You also say she is beautiful even if she is dead though that's my guess.
"The Black Bird sits"
Is the black bird a raven or the witch? :}
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