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(the new and improved version. older version is under spoiler) I used to walk by the foot of eroded…Wed Dec 08, 2010 7:06 pm -
Locked All's Well that Ends Wellall's well that ends well a revered line from Shakespeare it's very, very true. sometimes you get s…Tue Dec 07, 2010 9:49 pm -
This is an edit of a poem called "I Slept Alone" that I posted on here a little while ago. Any sugg…Tue Dec 07, 2010 7:53 pm -
I'd like to know what you think about this poem. I'm not sure it flows too well, but it's hard to j…Tue Dec 07, 2010 2:17 pm -
So, I had the first stanza just sitting around for a really long time. I looked at it and just star…Tue Dec 07, 2010 11:01 am -
Took this one down...hated itTue Dec 07, 2010 6:09 am -
Other than editing old poems, this is the first poetry I've written recently. I appreciate reviews.…Sun Dec 05, 2010 8:25 pm -
Icey, silver glitters of frost, They fall, they cover us as we walk, They hit me in cold, wet, hard…Sun Dec 05, 2010 8:23 pm -
Bubbles flew like hot air balloons - on crack cocaine. With sugar and ice, in a glass, half empty, …Sun Dec 05, 2010 8:21 pm -
"My life and all others are inter-twined.Nothing can compare to me, yet I am stuck at the bottom. I…Sun Dec 05, 2010 2:07 am
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So, this is my first attemp at writing a humorous poem... I know that limerick are funny poems, so,…Fri Dec 03, 2010 9:13 am -
So, I know this poem doesn't rhyme! :? This is the first poem I've ever write, it just came to my m…Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:13 am -
(Hey I'm a new member and this is my first post on this site :]) I don’t know what to do. I feel li…Wed Dec 01, 2010 9:25 pm -
Such unique angels dance from the sky. The spin soft and slowy, and now here they lie. So many ange…Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:32 pm -
Light bulbs broke Spectres held hands Waves tore souls I didn't realize Fire doused homes Lips expl…Tue Nov 30, 2010 10:03 pm -
And the winner is . . . Really, who cares? Forced fed views from the judges in their chairs. Realit…Tue Nov 30, 2010 11:34 am -
Crimson water floods the drain As my face follows Down Into darkness. -----------------------------…Tue Nov 30, 2010 2:36 am -
I know this needs work but I would just like to see what people think :) Does Prince Charming ride …Mon Nov 29, 2010 11:09 pm -
I wrote this at 1:00am yesterday... I was like half in limbo and I couldn't sleep so... I don't kno…Mon Nov 29, 2010 6:38 pm -
How is this poem? Good, bad? What needs improvement? A shallow puddle near the middle of the road T…Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:30 pm
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Once again my friend, we find ourselves walking along our forgotten memories. but in the end (we we…Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:11 pm -
This is a poem I wrote about Henry VIII of England and all his poor six wives. I was bored when I w…Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:05 pm -
Just something random I wrote. --------------------------- I hear the whispers in my ear, they try …Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:45 pm -
You are the Flame, I am the Shadow. When you appear. You give joy With your radiating light, It pul…Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:41 pm -
read my poem abuse first if you want the full thing I come back to the dirty little shack i left he…Sun Nov 28, 2010 8:03 pm -
Written for school-- structured poetry is about as opposite as you can get from my norm, prose poet…Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:49 pm -
Moonlight Moonlight flittered down through the leaves and onto the forest floor lighting up the tre…Sun Nov 28, 2010 7:25 pm -
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Okay, really don't know how to feel about this piece. :? I wrote it up in a sum total of thirty sec…Sat Nov 27, 2010 7:18 pm -
remember when we stood on the pier, looking out on the water; remember when you held my hand. you w…Fri Nov 26, 2010 10:40 pm -
Attention I’m trying to keep a hold of my emotions, But all I want to do, Is break down and cry. I …Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:34 pm -
*being edited!*Wed Nov 24, 2010 9:15 pm -
Here i lie again in this dark night the shadows my only friend heart broker here i lie again alone …Wed Nov 24, 2010 8:54 pm -
Mary lies smiling on the blacktop, finding faces in the cumulous clouds. Around her lie her friends…Wed Nov 24, 2010 12:55 pm -
This was a blog but I wanted some reviews(: "Forever." I smiled. I couldn't help but to smile. I wo…Tue Nov 23, 2010 6:20 pm -
People usually drink wine with meals, Rosé, white or red regardless, I take a swig of poison, but d…Tue Nov 23, 2010 2:18 am -
People usually drink wine with meals, Rosé, white or red regardless, I take a swig of poison, but d…Mon Nov 22, 2010 6:01 pm -
Atop our complex seventeen, There lie a garden with a view. And there a yellow flower bloomed, A da…Mon Nov 22, 2010 5:38 am -
So, I this was an idea I stored in my "Stuff I Should Use" folder, and came across today. I decided…Mon Nov 22, 2010 2:15 am -
Hey! Um... I once read a book called Uglies by Scott Westerfeld and enjoyed the series a ton. I sug…Mon Nov 22, 2010 12:39 am -
This is my first thread ever on this site, I'm kinda new to both this forums and poetry.. Excuse my…Sun Nov 21, 2010 11:02 am -
This poem is called a collage poem, and that's because there's a particular structure to it (and ye…Sun Nov 21, 2010 7:03 am -
Experiment I found from a couple weeks ago and decided to finish. Not a religious thingy despite th…Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:55 am -
I dont have a proper name for this yet but I just came up with cause I feeling really down lately s…Sun Nov 21, 2010 1:45 am -
So I have absolutely no idea where to put this, but Other is always a good place to go. When in dou…Fri Nov 19, 2010 6:15 pm -
Skysea The sky is A migrating sea seen through The aquarium of the windows Of a library. ---- This …Fri Nov 19, 2010 6:00 pm -
Tears tears tears of blood dirt water silt mud things alike things the same things different things…Thu Nov 18, 2010 1:03 am -
I am swimming in a complex of cochineal. It coats the carpals of the spray I hold in hand and drenc…Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:49 am -
I can't decide whether I should scrap this or not. Thoughts? Ode to Freckles: I want to kiss each i…Thu Nov 18, 2010 12:37 am -
I looked into your soft blue eyes, and I see what could have been. More than talking, laughing and …Wed Nov 17, 2010 7:24 am
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