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Hi! I'm here to leave a quick review!!
First Impression: Soo...this is a big first for me...xD...I don't think I would have ever expected to run into the ending of a novel being posted before anything else...but hmm....well it sounded really interesting so here I took a look at it, and it looks like either a sad or bittersweet one judging by how this is going here.
Anyway let's get right to it,
...Death came from the left, in the form of a silent whisper. He didn’t see the other vehicle run the red light. He didn’t know she never had her seat belt on, or that the last thing she imagined was the smile of a forgotten face. The last thing he saw was the flash of iridescent yellow; he heard the screech of tires on pavement as one-by-one they locked. And as he felt every bone in his body shatter he used his last glimpse of reality, and looked at her, drew in every one of her features, and admired her beauty for the last time.Then with his last breath, he whispered “Thank you.”
Hmm...well this is a big first, reading the last page of something before everything...but hmm...assuming this moment here where this woman is sweeping in from nowhere to knock this other person in the vehicle and kill him is somehow significant to the plot, I feel like this could be an awesome beginning to an end...that thank you especially seems to have a lot happening behind it, its almost like he wants it to happen somehow...well...certainly very interesting to see how this kind of death is a satisfying end to this man's life.
O Dalaigh pulled himself up, holding a hand against the wound in his side He was tired, his head fuzzy from the loss of the blood; but it was over. It was finally over. shuffling the few feet towards the other mangled cab of metal, O Dalaigh reached for his piece before he realized it was no longer there. He had lost it earlier that day in the warehouse. But it didn't matter anymore, at this point he could see Brant. His body wrapped around the steering wheel. Besides him sat a young girl, head burrowed in the half-inflated airbag.
Okay...I assuming this is another person in the same car, well him saying everything is over is definitely what you'd expect in a last page, hmm...and there's some mysterious piece, okay..that's very interesting...looks like there's potentially gonna be something like that in the story...and of course dead people, including a young girl, at this point its hard to tell if this is somehow a happy ending or not...with the death of a young girl, I'm inclined to think its one of the sadder ones.
O Dalaigh reached towards her, hopping that by any miracle she was still alive. His hopping was pointless. Stumbling, O Dalaigh made his was way back towards the other car, looking for his phone. He spot it lying half hidden under some foliage five feet from the car. Picking it up he made the call that would put all this behind him.
This is detective O Dalaigh, we have an 11-80 off Unser and Paseo del Volcan, coroner required. Our case is finally closed Auda. Finally closed.
Hmm...well...mystery novel I see...well...those are cool, and now it looks like despite all odds and with all these deaths apparently everything is solved in the end judging by that...and well that seems like it would be pretty satisfying as far as endings go....and it might just be one of those bittersweet ones. The hoping for the girl to be alive and turning out she's dead is probably not a very happy sign, I feel like that might be someone we care about if we read the story...but hmm...certainly an interesting ending this one.
Aaaaand that's it for this one.
Overall: Overall, based on this...I think I may read the novel, or may not...its looks to be pretty sad there, especially if the dead folks are people we're supposed to know and care about, and I generally don't like sad endings like this, especially on long novels, so I personally would probably not read it, but it looks like one of those scenes where all the pieces fall into place, and everything is solved finally...and basically that whispered thank you especially appears to be one of those satisfying case solving scenes perhaps and that would certainly be something I'm up for reading...soo...yeah I'm undecided on this one...xD
As always remember to take what you think was helpful and forget the rest.
Stay Safe
Harry
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