Hey Shauzer, Evzzer here!
Thoroughly enjoyed this one. I got a very surreal quality from it, almost dream like. The altered refrain at the end was a very sophisticated poetic device to convey the difference between living in the moment, and remembering the far away love from a holiday.
The agony and turmoil felt knowing this could be your only time spent with this girl in which you feel strong love towards, is a bleak image. As you said, it is a "a mere glimpse of something great, a tease." As you fall more for this girl, reality is constantly on your mind as you know this can't happen. Again, the word "tease" comes back into my mind.
Overall i really enjoyed this one man, you're great!
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Reviews: 5
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