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This is all she can be...Thu Apr 14, 2011 12:26 am -
The first strike knocks me down. I choke, tasting blood as it froths in my mouth-- even the clouds …Wed Apr 13, 2011 11:29 pm -
Cause sad poems bore meWed Apr 13, 2011 5:33 am -
My day :)Wed Apr 13, 2011 12:56 am -
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[Working Title :D]Tue Apr 12, 2011 5:09 pm -
Ripples in the Water BY Adrian If you could hear what I was thinking, would you change your mind? W…Tue Apr 12, 2011 3:02 pm -
Okay, so this is just a rough shot at poetry. Critique would be much appreciated! I know the theme …Tue Apr 12, 2011 1:42 pm -
This poem is a metaphor for growing up living in the shadows. Maybe of a sibling or something. Ther…Tue Apr 12, 2011 1:47 am -
The skies of my desires stretched across eternity, mock me as I stand an unmoving tree. Destined to…Sun Apr 10, 2011 7:03 pm -
a bit juvinile, but i hope you like it!Sun Apr 10, 2011 6:33 am -
a short poem of a fun day with a cute stranger.Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:59 pm -
Half an hour of free time, and Voila! Quite rough, so feedback please! :) Memories of happier times…Sat Apr 09, 2011 6:41 pm -
For the poetry pairs contestFri Apr 08, 2011 11:14 pm -
One of my NaPos. I want critiques on these!Fri Apr 08, 2011 7:32 pm -
Jash and Kagi's entry for the Poetry Pair Contest. My parents say I've issues; ____ they tend to ju…Fri Apr 08, 2011 4:16 am -
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Tear jerker for some if you relateThu Apr 07, 2011 11:42 pm -
severe writer's block :PThu Apr 07, 2011 10:01 pm -
Have been inactive for various reasons, so thought I'd post something I wrote a while back. It's an…Thu Apr 07, 2011 5:12 pm -
poetry, you guys...Thu Apr 07, 2011 5:08 pm -
Rhymie stuff about not wanting life to hurt so much.Wed Apr 06, 2011 4:10 pm -
This one' is for Poetry pair contest. Please help by reviewingWed Apr 06, 2011 5:44 am -
A/N: I decided to also post this here for some reason... To tell you the truth it's because I scann…Wed Apr 06, 2011 4:04 am -
O’ cast thy spell My deep blue sea! Let your tender waves Caress me, Let my troubles float away In …Wed Apr 06, 2011 12:51 am -
THE WISDOM OF MR FOX One day, I met a fox Coming down the roadside He nodded in greeting and Turned…Wed Apr 06, 2011 12:46 am -
I know the last two stanzas seem as if they don't belong. I'd love suggestions about how to change …Tue Apr 05, 2011 10:07 pm -
Hope it's up to scratch, I'm kind of new here :STue Apr 05, 2011 4:00 pm -
This was originally supposed to be a song, but I think I like it better as a poem. I sorta wrote th…Mon Apr 04, 2011 11:11 pm -
I've been to the place where the West wind blows, Where wide rivers flow with great vim. I've seen …Mon Apr 04, 2011 1:32 am -
It's suppoed to be a song.. but oh well.Sun Apr 03, 2011 10:15 pm -
GrandmaSun Apr 03, 2011 8:29 am -
Contrast light when darkness falls. The sun rest upon the sea, Hills alive upon lights true desire,…Fri Apr 01, 2011 11:16 pm -
So, this poem is trying not to be emo but I'm not sure it's managing very well..? Also, I'm not sur…Fri Apr 01, 2011 2:34 am -
This poetry is really different for me. I usually write happy-naturey poetry. So please review! Als…Thu Mar 31, 2011 11:48 pm -
My worldThu Mar 31, 2011 9:28 pm -
I felt like screwing around with refrain and repetions: (In some parts, you could say that there is…Thu Mar 31, 2011 3:09 pm -
Sorry , this poem is pretty short . I haven't wrote in awhile... So tell me how bad it is :/ We lov…Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:00 pm -
It can't pass me by.Thu Mar 31, 2011 2:44 am -
sunrinseThu Mar 31, 2011 2:28 am -
Walking down life’s empty path I find myself alone. The answers are not fully clear And sometimes n…Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:25 am -
Poem #1Thu Mar 31, 2011 1:19 am -
hard times have enclosed us, and we've floated apart - I'm sorryWed Mar 30, 2011 11:11 pm -
Be thankful of your days and live them without regrets. Have fun, do things just to say you did it.…Wed Mar 30, 2011 5:32 pm -
I wrote this poem after seeing someone in school I was really interested. I'd say hello if i could …Wed Mar 30, 2011 4:49 pm -
I wanted to tell you that what you did was wrong. You taking her side shouldn't have happened. I ca…Wed Mar 30, 2011 2:08 pm -
0. It was half past four; I found you sitting chin-deep in the sunlight that was pooled in my yard,…Wed Mar 30, 2011 1:48 am -
This is the first poem I ever actually took seriously. Its may not make sense so constructive criti…Wed Mar 30, 2011 1:34 am -
A poem about attitudes to lifeWed Mar 30, 2011 12:31 am
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I wished for his hands to touch mine. It was a part of love that I was hoping to find. I'd watch hi…Tue Mar 29, 2011 5:02 pm
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