Young Writers Society

I see beauty in the sky
I see beauty in the deep oceans
I see through the deep fogs,
through the shallow waters,
through you.

and,
is there a difference?

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Just a quick little thing, ;D.

EDIT: Is there a way I can preserve white space(multiple spaces)? Curse you browsers and your HTML parsing! There's some stuff that's not spaced as I'd like!

It's very simple (and that ain't bad). One Idea, that's all. How can one review that?

Keep it up, anyways..

Simple, but makes the mind work. I like those kinds of poems, ones that make me think. I think it's great! Maybe the extra "enter" is unnecessary because one could just go like this:

[b]--[b] and is there a difference?

Short, sweet, and to the point. It really makes you think. I liked this, great job and good luck with future writes.