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Cemetery Heart Opening the gateway to buried mortality. A landscape of serenity, freedom from agony…Tue Jul 26, 2005 11:42 am -
beautiful guitars and mesmeric music taught you the ninetyseventytwo style, and since you could onl…Mon Jul 25, 2005 12:18 pm -
Drink Coke and try again... Can't remember the last time you peered under a bottle cap and actually…Sun Jul 24, 2005 12:30 am -
Everyone is ironic in the afterlife With Anubis and his Jackal Head cackling like a Pagan amidst A …Sat Jul 23, 2005 11:13 am -
"The First Kiss...Again" This first kiss, so different from the last; Full of passion and hungry fo…Thu Jul 21, 2005 10:08 pm -
starstruck lovers in comets of beauty collide and explode and the rest of society is left to pick u…Thu Jul 21, 2005 7:09 pm -
Who is that half-assed lazy girl Walking down the hallway Walking over my friends and I My life? Wh…Thu Jul 21, 2005 5:14 am -
Ooh, I like it. Especially the last two lines. :)Thu Jul 21, 2005 4:44 am -
Me-You Night angels 7-17-05 Night angels, looming on the edge of their dreamland, stand facing into…Wed Jul 20, 2005 2:05 am -
meandering through the hidden pathways of middle class education and pathetic adolescent emotions a…Tue Jul 19, 2005 6:14 pm -
i can only watch you so long before i need to know what's going on because misty-eyes are so overdo…Mon Jul 18, 2005 5:37 pm -
Very cool. Except for the first two lines: not working. Change 'em or get rid of 'em.Mon Jul 18, 2005 4:37 pm -
how many times do you need to make me think i'mclose before you blow___me away again i keep playing…Mon Jul 18, 2005 9:45 am -
The days disappear. Together, they form just about three months. Three months without you. I feel a…Fri Jul 15, 2005 4:51 am -
Records line the beige and orange walls Volkswagons are only trendy When you paint them in daisies.…Fri Jul 15, 2005 3:47 am -
Wow. That was very romantic...that was the kind of poem that makes everything I write look like cra…Thu Jul 14, 2005 1:56 am -
You said I was the “stupidest bitch” you‘d ever met, Then knocked me to the ground. Before that mom…Thu Jul 14, 2005 1:51 am -
OMYGOSHHHHHH. I'm sorry, I don't mean to get all immature about it but this poem is awesome. If I w…Thu Jul 14, 2005 1:51 am -
your golden green leaves decorate the feral branches, reaching over bypassers reaching into their h…Tue Jul 12, 2005 3:42 pm -
it's not big, it's not clever, but it is me. I don't know if you've ever conversed with a brick wal…Tue Jul 12, 2005 5:21 am -
I think this poem is missing something but I can't quite figure out what it is so therefore I can't…Tue Jul 12, 2005 1:19 am -
summer is really getting away while we french kiss walls and talk about jesus’ pound cake i will ne…Tue Jul 12, 2005 12:17 am -
the quiescent melancholy of summer nights drowned in sun-dried spirits, twenty-first century suburb…Sun Jul 10, 2005 9:25 pm -
EDITED VERSION: it doesn't have any sugar but that doesn't mean it isn't sweet the olden days of in…Fri Jul 08, 2005 1:40 pm -
I like it, but the first stanza just seems not as useful as the others, and almost looks like it do…Fri Jul 08, 2005 1:36 pm -
the secret glances that we swopped across a crowded room filled with the smell of teenage hormones …Fri Jul 08, 2005 1:30 pm -
NOTE: If you haven't already read it, I would encourage you to read this: http://www.youngwritersso…Fri Jul 08, 2005 1:29 pm -
the clouds were bleeding acid rain and they sprayed graffiti with messages of love the walls were i…Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:18 pm -
it's only because you glanced that cymbal that my heart keeps beating soundly with jammed wires and…Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:10 pm -
This poem was written January 19, 2005 aka looooong time ago. I just felt like posting it. It's kin…Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:04 pm -
no one sees what you put your heart into in a scratched up binder bent out of shape. their papers f…Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:03 pm -
the wind blows through your hair and your mind and it feels like breath of fresh air but you don't …Thu Jul 07, 2005 2:02 pm -
don't you think that skateboards and three-chord riffs are a little overdone? as much as you hide b…Tue Jul 05, 2005 3:59 am -
Anyone who reads my poetry on the site knows that I am not a very good poet. Here's my final attemp…Mon Jul 04, 2005 7:01 pm -
you always pray for thunderstorms the night before so tomorrow's skirmishes are a foregone conclusi…Sun Jul 03, 2005 3:35 pm -
(No preamble. Here's my sonnet) Are you sorry for everything you said, And all the things you forgo…Sat Jul 02, 2005 6:40 am -
I haven't posted anything poetrylike in along time but I just wrote this..so I posted. enjoy. CL Ho…Fri Jul 01, 2005 9:38 pm -
So this is the time of teenage kicks Let’s all go out and get pissed There's time to learn, and tim…Fri Jul 01, 2005 8:27 pm -
you can do better than this, brad. maybe if you wrote about something other than slitting your wris…Fri Jul 01, 2005 7:02 pm -
the sirens are calling across the city you flash red and blue but it's the screaming and the blood …Fri Jul 01, 2005 6:39 pm -
So now I want to kill myself.Fri Jul 01, 2005 6:35 pm -
why does it matter what goes on in your room on the side of the bed that no one sees? does it matte…Fri Jul 01, 2005 6:18 pm -
I don't know where this should have gone, and Dramatic Poetry felt the best; if you disagree, just …Thu Jun 30, 2005 6:15 pm -
This is not fair. I don't see why I can never write like this...never. Sorry but no critiquing for …Wed Jun 29, 2005 6:58 pm -
i remember summer days lying by the pool on psychedelic towels, talking to my auntie about populari…Mon Jun 27, 2005 6:06 pm -
Lately its felt like theres something wrong with this family. Theres this presaure that centers aro…Sun Jun 26, 2005 3:11 am -
This is the new way of living. Trapped inside my overrated hometown. We live in a house where we ma…Sat Jun 25, 2005 2:13 am -
Once I thought thy face was finest, when my lips touched yours palest. To be kissed by either god o…Fri Jun 24, 2005 9:29 am -
Crying alone, Always alone, Clasping my escape within my hands, Shaking so violently, but careful n…Fri Jun 24, 2005 8:10 am -
Incredible. The poem itself is well written, but I think it's the meaning behind it that has me cap…Fri Jun 24, 2005 7:20 am
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