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'He’s thinking in another language now, hitch-hiker thumb jerking toward the city spilled from its …Mon Sep 05, 2005 1:55 am -
A pathway to where? Will I experience its meandering way? Someone has before gained its wisdom, it …Sun Sep 04, 2005 9:48 pm -
Blank Paper (aka Writers Block) down in the dark where ideas lurk like twisting steamy vapours amid…Sun Sep 04, 2005 1:27 pm -
[rated the way it was because this is even confusing for me, i'd like to see somebody understand it…Fri Sep 02, 2005 12:32 am -
Old Mad Tom laughs when little boys burn to death and four-leaf clovers give him heart-ache. his br…Thu Sep 01, 2005 8:03 pm -
This reads like an acid trip, I sort of like it. Last stanza especially is quite evocative.Thu Sep 01, 2005 7:43 pm -
yeesh poor girl if i walked to her would she hurt? but a mere child could bring her down... poor he…Thu Sep 01, 2005 7:38 pm
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this is for one of my best friends Robert, he and I have this running joke in spanish: I call him s…Wed Aug 31, 2005 8:40 pm -
It's hard to see the light when you stare into countless shadows, hidden behind the facade, a veil …Mon Aug 29, 2005 11:49 pm -
it all comes to this this is the final stage and i'm through i'm through with your words your torme…Mon Aug 29, 2005 8:59 pm
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To the weak it's the End. Are you breathing? Then it's not over yet. You're still alive It may hurt…Mon Aug 29, 2005 11:32 am -
I blame this all on Thomas, it's all his fault. In class today he was trying to say, My shirt is bl…Fri Aug 26, 2005 3:01 am -
There is this highschool class called Creative Expressions. If I think about it, you can read this,…Thu Aug 25, 2005 12:19 am
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It all changed the night you cut your hair, when you opened a portal to make-up and low-cut designe…Wed Aug 24, 2005 7:31 am -
Time has passed and I have healed, So don't think I still feel for you. The tide’s gone out and I'v…Tue Aug 23, 2005 10:19 pm -
jetlag poetry touche (exit) I keep this gun in the bible you gave me it chases my demons down deep …Mon Aug 22, 2005 2:45 am -
hey guys, I´m in Salamanca, Spain right now. Sitting in an internet cafe at a comp with a crappy ke…Mon Aug 22, 2005 2:42 am -
I’m insane, clown-painted prowler, half an hour from the genius on the table. Indeed you are Brad..…Sun Aug 21, 2005 11:49 pm
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Pretty darn good...to me it felt like a trip of self-realisation well-portrayed, without getting st…Sat Aug 20, 2005 10:18 pm -
Yes, because it's called perception. Am I right? Am I right!? And, for lack of feedback, I end with…Sat Aug 20, 2005 3:29 am -
I get the feeling that there was some meaning here that I just couldn't grasp. But even though I ha…Sat Aug 20, 2005 12:33 am -
That both shocked and made me want a muffin so badly. NEVER SCARE ME AGAIN! Bravo!Thu Aug 18, 2005 11:08 pm
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gliding along a two-lane highway at 95 miles per hour you speed over lime green lakes and wash past…Thu Aug 18, 2005 2:06 pm -
well you certianely make it hard for me to critique things. I've sat here at least two different ti…Thu Aug 18, 2005 2:34 am -
My little boy blue My little boy blue is tumbling down the staircase. blistered, and broken and blu…Wed Aug 17, 2005 12:30 am -
I am writing this for a poetry contest so I really need good/harsh critque on it, thank you!! I am …Fri Aug 12, 2005 4:22 am -
NOTE: I wrote this poem in less than 1 minute. I just started thinking and writing...I've never don…Thu Aug 11, 2005 3:45 am -
You are so very fragile that I feel forced to suffocate you in bubblewrap and enclose you in a card…Thu Aug 11, 2005 2:29 am
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You write so much about memories and the past. But it's a good thing though. You do it without nece…Thu Aug 11, 2005 2:18 am -
The Happiest Days of my Life Feet sticking out round every corner Shrewd comments from behind every…Wed Aug 10, 2005 9:23 am -
I think this may be a new favorite of mine. I really like the way the stanzas interrupt each other …Tue Aug 09, 2005 5:42 am -
you came like lightning and thunder flash bang into my life beautifulwilddangerous a furious cloud …Mon Aug 08, 2005 8:29 pm -
Ha. So so oddly amazing. Every step you walk you have to position yourself in just the right light,…Sun Aug 07, 2005 4:12 pm
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* Waiting for gold to fall in your lap rather than creating rainbows for yourself and hiding the tr…Thu Aug 04, 2005 11:37 pm -
If you read my blog, you'll kind of get what this is. Damn I hate long distance relationships somet…Wed Aug 03, 2005 8:32 pm -
I need help with this one, it doesn't flow right Drilled and invaded at the hands of hands unfit fo…Wed Aug 03, 2005 5:15 pm -
how come you're posting so much, aren't you in russia passing out over 200 proof vodka or something…Tue Aug 02, 2005 10:47 pm -
i would love to have something beautiful to tell you, something that would make your eyes shine fro…Sun Jul 31, 2005 9:48 pm -
An Ending The solitary man. At the top of the cliff. Looked about. At All the beauty. And Wondered …Sun Jul 31, 2005 9:33 pm -
I loved it all... But honestly. Was that take your pants off thing really nessisary. I mean you go …Sat Jul 30, 2005 8:49 pm
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I absolutely love the last line.Sat Jul 30, 2005 7:54 pm -
you lie in bed and encourage your eyes to surround yourself with infatuation and glass dolls, broke…Sat Jul 30, 2005 4:56 am -
Hehe. To me, it pretty much was just a load of pants up until the last line: 'you see, the truth is…Fri Jul 29, 2005 6:40 pm -
A Buzzing Light 7-26-05 The northern light seizes, shudders, new doorbell tinkling pain, new awfuln…Fri Jul 29, 2005 2:11 am -
I've been looking at this poem for about an hour wondering what I can actually comment on. The way …Thu Jul 28, 2005 8:39 am -
i know a girl who likes to write pretentious things like 'long live denim' on misty windows with ch…Wed Jul 27, 2005 5:15 pm -
i would never admit to anyone but coffee stained notebooks and the anonymous white screen that i th…Wed Jul 27, 2005 3:39 am -
Hmm. Dark, but I like it. *laughs* I'm horrible at critiquing poetry. There's something about the l…Wed Jul 27, 2005 2:56 am -
7-19-05 I’d like to see you, sprawled out, splayed naked beneath the remorseless summer sun to feel…Tue Jul 26, 2005 7:11 pm -
already your face has become blurred. a static image, faltering in my minds eye. even as i write th…Tue Jul 26, 2005 1:01 pm
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