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Short, sweet, to the point. Basically, that is all I have to say.Sat Apr 09, 2005 9:25 pm -
Tapestry of Ages The labyrinth of life Bewildering and mesmerizing A great tapestry of time Intrica…Sat Apr 09, 2005 7:50 am -
Shattered dreams of youth lay upon my feet. I stand and stare at them as if they were something of …Sat Apr 09, 2005 7:38 am -
oh, this was very pretty. i liked it, although I got a little lost at the end of the second verse. …Thu Apr 07, 2005 11:28 pm -
The wind caresses the leaves from the trees And I watch them fall, willingly Bending in the force o…Thu Apr 07, 2005 1:03 am -
did you see the mashedpurestewed icehailsnow (simply frozen water in different so many millions of …Tue Apr 05, 2005 6:36 am -
He Numbs the pain You bring me Every single day of my life. He Knows exactly who I am Doesn't force…Tue Apr 05, 2005 6:35 am -
It’s like some sort of weird spirit takes over my body when I’m around you-I’m sure I couldn’t have…Sun Apr 03, 2005 5:44 am -
its really hard to give advice on your poems... i cant really explain why, its just that they do so…Sat Apr 02, 2005 5:15 pm -
NicklePickle helped me edit this poem. So many emotions now come rushing back to me As I think abou…Sat Apr 02, 2005 3:19 am -
"let me be the one to hold the knife let me be the one to kiss you let me be the one who tastes you…Sat Apr 02, 2005 12:25 am -
I don’t really know how to feel you, but maybe by feel I mean show you how I feel, I’ve already tou…Wed Mar 30, 2005 3:46 pm -
How many petitions with underlying scars and broken hearts must you make before you realize: there …Wed Mar 30, 2005 1:04 am -
Song of the Exile A missing place Within my heart One I cannot escape It tortures my soul I am not …Mon Mar 28, 2005 4:00 am -
your eyes smile at me through a pixelated webcam. and that's all i know of your soft slim figure. i…Sat Mar 26, 2005 10:28 pm -
hi yall well my name is jonny and im knew here so i am posting my first poem. tell me what you guys…Sat Mar 26, 2005 9:15 pm -
You. You planted the ember of white-hot anger inside me. You fanned it to life, Feeding it with an …Fri Mar 25, 2005 2:47 am -
The City of Time Rusted bells clang together in bitter defeat The cold and desolate bell tower Roll…Wed Mar 23, 2005 10:00 pm -
Your long tangled hair with little peices of broken twigs sway through the wind, Your big goofy gri…Wed Mar 23, 2005 8:18 pm -
All of her emotions, Held up inside, Boilng and churning inside of her, She has finally reached the…Wed Mar 23, 2005 5:54 am -
i'm taking another stab after being torn savagely to shreads in my last post. it would seem that pe…Wed Mar 23, 2005 5:51 am -
Doo be doo be doo...Not quite sure who this about. Betrayal, anger, pain, life sucking in general, …Mon Mar 21, 2005 3:53 pm -
Not my favourite poem, but that's more to do with my taste than your writing. This poem reads too m…Mon Mar 21, 2005 3:48 pm -
He thinks he's the hero and she's the villian, But he isn't good and pure. He's really the villian …Mon Mar 21, 2005 1:35 am -
Wow, i loved this... fig newtons till i vomit... ew... why not grow a damn tree in your belly while…Sun Mar 20, 2005 8:17 am -
say a little prayer, to that person there. it all builds up, we're gonna die tonight. say a little …Sun Mar 20, 2005 12:48 am -
it's falling, gently drifting down. they call it pure and beauty. what harm can come from seeing el…Sat Mar 19, 2005 8:15 am
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I already commented on this poem before...but after reading it again, i still think it is very well…Sat Mar 19, 2005 5:28 am -
Here we go! I don't know why I wrote this poem. I wrote from a person who's dying's point of view. …Fri Mar 18, 2005 7:48 pm -
noise [noize] just noise don’t mean nothing it don’t mean nothing Earlier when you let me read this…Fri Mar 18, 2005 3:31 pm -
Life is FREE STUFF I got what I wanted and You want my blood on your hands You seem to fall in plac…Fri Mar 18, 2005 8:49 am -
The Vacuum People will not necessarily be transient. The rumour that they are something other than …Fri Mar 18, 2005 4:40 am -
We don't know there are unknown unknowns. There aren't things we don't know we know. We also don't …Fri Mar 18, 2005 1:40 am
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skeletons trapped in the back of a closet no one knows they belong to you up a narrow staircase the…Tue Mar 15, 2005 2:58 pm -
To feel one’s pain; to feel one’s joy To know one’s heart Not the facades they deploy To love one e…Mon Mar 14, 2005 12:19 am -
I know... it's a tad wierd. *** The finely huge holes filling October lace, Handcrafted, vintage an…Sun Mar 13, 2005 4:12 pm -
How many times do you have to fall into puddles of gasoline and break perfect rainbows to see that …Sat Mar 12, 2005 2:54 am -
Wow it's very lovely... I liked the contrast of it... I need to look up "cherub"...Fri Mar 11, 2005 8:54 pm
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forewarning: this is bad. --------- wearing converse trainers and waiting on street corners. if you…Fri Mar 11, 2005 6:26 pm -
you're a masterpiece if you can call it that anymore after swarms of followers crowd you from me an…Fri Mar 11, 2005 6:24 pm -
You look beautiful still After all these years Not a day has passed For my heart is true And I stil…Fri Mar 11, 2005 6:00 pm -
You want to speak the truth,But you won't,Why? Are afraid of what other people will say and thik of…Fri Mar 11, 2005 3:51 am -
There are worser things in this world Little brother Than a sound inablility to do more than 2 thin…Fri Mar 11, 2005 1:35 am -
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This was actually really good. sort of universal, a lot of us could relate. Not much else to say...…Tue Mar 08, 2005 8:42 pm -
for callie *cute* because you have spent the larger portion of your life praying and scrambling and…Mon Mar 07, 2005 4:13 pm -
I bit into my chocolate heart and it tasted like peppermint, looked like sugary emeralds inside. I …Mon Mar 07, 2005 4:08 pm -
the refreshing taste of nicotine smoke and orange juice at four in the morning the fabulous eerines…Mon Mar 07, 2005 12:24 am -
I thought this was really neat. It didn't really flow in my opinion and some of the lines that seem…Sun Mar 06, 2005 11:59 pm
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