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I can't believe my eyes, Have i decieved my own self once again in believing i know what's best for…Thu Oct 27, 2005 1:45 pm -
This some thing I free wrote. So I hope you Like it. Hearts breaking Friends leaving Tears falling …Thu Oct 27, 2005 2:02 am -
The night it falls so silently sometimes I find myself caught by surprise. I will wake up from my s…Thu Oct 27, 2005 12:50 am -
A single ray of hope shines, an alabaster beam, copper chords of sunlight bathed in crimson rays of…Wed Oct 26, 2005 2:16 pm -
Well today was a rainy day Today The sky was gray The thunder came. The lighting struck again and a…Wed Oct 26, 2005 10:42 am
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I always hated that cold, dead doll, The one with the straight-through stare, The one who sat aloft…Wed Oct 26, 2005 3:08 am -
The effervescence of my beer escapes my lips as my mouth parts and my eyes close It's as if the wal…Tue Oct 25, 2005 7:51 pm -
I loved this line - "and stare at the lava lamps [eachother]?" Nice. Otherwise, do you really want …Tue Oct 25, 2005 6:17 pm -
If the chainsaw in my head cut through the night Could you sleep through it? Or would you wake disc…Mon Oct 24, 2005 8:18 am -
This feels like the same as your other recent poem, "Living Alone With Green Carpet" ... same subje…Sun Oct 23, 2005 12:15 pm -
you gave me nightmares about those emerald eyes: submerged in saturday-night delights, singing song…Sat Oct 22, 2005 7:53 am -
I liked this. I couldn't anticipate where it was going, but I felt guided along the way. Even with …Wed Oct 19, 2005 10:47 pm -
This was written (obviously) between waking up and falling asleep again, so please let me know how …Wed Oct 19, 2005 7:32 am -
Stereos paint pictures with their vibrations, lighting up the atmosphere. But all you do is play sa…Tue Oct 18, 2005 5:18 am -
I carved straight into him. His insides falling out Onto the ground. The smell was like Opening a t…Mon Oct 17, 2005 11:32 pm -
Bleeding yellow roses That sprout and take root They grow into my life And slowly begin to take ove…Mon Oct 17, 2005 6:51 pm -
I just got out of the hospital and have been placed on these lovely orange medication pills. Bear w…Mon Oct 17, 2005 6:08 pm -
No matter how I tried to read this critically, it just wouldn't come. I could only read it casually…Mon Oct 17, 2005 12:15 am -
FUCK YOU APATHY Fuck you, television watcher Isolation, the-world-doesn't-touch-you-liar. Artificia…Sun Oct 16, 2005 10:05 pm -
I like how pink eyeshadow looks under flashing green lights and I like how it feels to be seen. Not…Sat Oct 15, 2005 11:23 pm -
Okay...I'm trying to get back into the site, so I'm reading and critiquing. But I do hope that if I…Sat Oct 15, 2005 9:35 am -
One of God’s Wonders A ball of flame, hot and white Red and orange shining, yellow giving light Pur…Fri Oct 14, 2005 10:22 pm -
The Mask Clear, translucent skin Cemented and opaque Lush, beautiful lips Stifled and stitched Larg…Fri Oct 14, 2005 1:41 pm -
“In With the Old” He looks at the girl Because she looks Nothing like Her. He holds the girl’s hand…Fri Oct 14, 2005 7:33 am -
This poem is aimed at younger children, and may also be a song...any comments? I wish of wishes, of…Fri Oct 14, 2005 4:52 am -
a hail of brainwashed pride, flooding any particles left in the murky puddles where all the connect…Thu Oct 13, 2005 11:47 pm -
Smile My eyes ache when they watch your face, refusing to smile, smile like you did a long time ago…Thu Oct 13, 2005 11:14 pm -
*snaps fingers* Finally, a poem with rhyme and meter and not a senseless rant! That's what I call p…Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:35 am -
*This is a VERY rough draft. This is the first time I am writing this, so all the editing, thinking…Thu Oct 13, 2005 5:03 am -
I can't remember if I posted this or not...and if I did, just tell me and I'll delete it. Strong cr…Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:36 am -
Rain comes harder as Night grows older Laughter is softer as Tears come closer I'm not to leave the…Thu Oct 13, 2005 4:04 am -
The sun gently sets Another day has almost past. Have somehow got through, yet i still feel lost Ho…Wed Oct 12, 2005 1:57 pm -
In one place you follow a period with a capital, other times you do not. Kinda confusing. Also, why…Wed Oct 12, 2005 12:56 pm -
be patient don't rush, take it slow let the wind blow. feel the breeze through your hair, just feel…Mon Oct 10, 2005 4:59 pm -
I - XIII when we were young we loved everyone in those days we followed the latest craze sugar was …Mon Oct 10, 2005 4:31 pm -
lie irreversibly as distant fallen fences against white winter, as though the angle of repose is th…Mon Oct 10, 2005 7:13 am -
Mist and rain, May bring pain Thunder and lightning May be frightening, Sleet and frost Is when i'l…Sat Oct 08, 2005 10:17 am -
I am believed to terrify each and every land, I have in my hand a deadly magic wand, With its flick…Sat Oct 08, 2005 9:02 am -
My Idol Why can't i be strong like you? I look up to everything you do, The fears you fought The mo…Fri Oct 07, 2005 3:29 pm -
I am just a person walking by, Do i tell the truth or just plain lies? You have no idea what I've h…Fri Oct 07, 2005 10:32 am -
You were hard work today Pushing me over the edge I am strong and I can take it But you can see, ea…Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:27 pm -
Fade Away You just had to do it You couldn't stop You had to cause his body to drop The last thing …Thu Oct 06, 2005 7:09 am -
An Angel For Me The light shined through her beautiful hair, Gorgeous and talented, her skin so fai…Thu Oct 06, 2005 12:13 am -
I watch you twist old newspapers, clip twigs, unroll vines, pile them into a shape that will burn, …Wed Oct 05, 2005 9:29 pm -
Momentum I’ve laced my shoes and slouched my socks And hit the pavement, Jogging. I’m not warmed up…Wed Oct 05, 2005 9:04 pm -
Perfect If it weren't for you, I'd be perfect. If you weren't here, I'd have someone on my side. If…Wed Oct 05, 2005 6:32 pm
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The Mirror What do I see in this mirror? In this mirror all cracked and dingy? I see a memory, a ti…Wed Oct 05, 2005 6:22 pm -
I run toward the light, Always pushing toward the edge of the darkness, Looking for a chance to be …Wed Oct 05, 2005 12:52 am -
I remember, far in some distant dream When Earth was lit by awesome splendor, too, When holy men di…Tue Oct 04, 2005 11:42 pm -
Lies and Truth Friends and Enemies Love and Hate What's the difference anymore? Two powerful emotio…Tue Oct 04, 2005 9:55 pm
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