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ps. sorry, but I wanted to retain my indents, and since somebody forgot to leave us that option :ey…Fri Jun 24, 2005 5:05 am -
snatches of bright cotton sliding off to the south, pinned onto chocolat bleu Parisien just aches w…Thu Jun 23, 2005 2:30 pm -
its funny how we create such magnetism when we are standing still electronical pulses beating to th…Thu Jun 23, 2005 2:28 pm -
NOTE: this poem sucks...i know. but a friend of my friend's hung himself in his back yard and i wro…Thu Jun 23, 2005 2:23 pm -
you cup your hands when Mysteries rain down. let's play detective before they run away slipping thr…Thu Jun 23, 2005 2:21 pm -
This is my last breath I shall take You shall never see me again I am letting go. Don't try to help…Thu Jun 23, 2005 2:18 pm -
glittering pink flower earrings, auburn plaits heated by the sun, café mascara hanging off long las…Wed Jun 22, 2005 10:02 pm -
Of all the poems I’ve sat and written About you, my feelings, and my confusion This is the last one…Tue Jun 21, 2005 9:48 pm -
You're right. Angsty poetry does get annoying after the zillionth suicide poem.Tue Jun 21, 2005 8:14 pm -
Hey...I'm new here. But I thought I'd give this a try and see what people thought. I think this mig…Tue Jun 21, 2005 7:52 pm -
NOTE: This poem is sort of just about those who comitted suicide and veterans. But I can't decide o…Tue Jun 21, 2005 2:15 pm -
Ok whoa, this really needs to be toned down a little to be effective. Good writing doesn't need bla…Mon Jun 20, 2005 6:22 am -
It's Alright I told you I hate you You told me you cared I said I can't stand you You said you'd al…Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:25 am -
This was interesting. Very cool, thoough. My only suggestion is that you takke out the first word, …Sun Jun 19, 2005 11:22 am -
Sometimes it’s hard just to look at you So if I smile quirkily, and I seem almost giddy it’s not th…Sun Jun 19, 2005 1:59 am -
Great. I love the tone especially.Sat Jun 18, 2005 9:29 pm -
I really like it. The only suggestion I can think of is to fiddle around with the line-breakages to…Sat Jun 18, 2005 6:21 pm -
if you've started putting polls on your poems, yes.Sat Jun 18, 2005 1:12 pm -
You and I, we have quite the relationship. I do not know your name, Or your face. I do not know if …Sat Jun 18, 2005 1:07 pm -
Heh. Not profound, but not terrible, either.Thu Jun 16, 2005 2:53 am -
#yeah........i just needed to write something.....and this something won't get out of my head....# …Tue Jun 14, 2005 5:59 pm -
rough throat sinus nose throbbing head. it's country Paris - caramel dirt, menthe grass, tiny crumb…Sat Jun 11, 2005 10:03 pm -
Wow... I have seen so many poems about suicide. Sometimes the topic does get a little dried up. I d…Fri Jun 10, 2005 7:22 pm -
All right, I enjoy love poems mostly, but I don't agree with these American idea's of love. Butterf…Fri Jun 10, 2005 4:54 pm -
This was not meant to be a poem...but if you must you may tear it apart all you like (go wild, Brad…Thu Jun 09, 2005 8:12 pm -
and what you do not know is that the end of days has already begun. there will be no white horses r…Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:17 pm -
So this is Life-- Waking up in the morning Plodding along meaninglessly Infatuated with a woman. No…Wed Jun 08, 2005 11:01 pm -
This is a freewrite I did and I absolutely hate it, so go ahead, tear it apart.... It has no editin…Wed Jun 08, 2005 8:27 pm -
Bending the truth So you make me Feel like there’s Nothing I can do You make me feel At fault, as t…Tue Jun 07, 2005 7:05 am -
my friend wrote this poem Eternal Life She-ever since six planned to perfection the bouquet of pear…Tue Jun 07, 2005 6:53 am -
get away from me you're nothing but a two-faced lyncathropic waste of space. One minute the aura of…Tue Jun 07, 2005 2:13 am -
This really impressed me, Brad. Very good job; the imagery captured my attention well. Mmm... the u…Sun Jun 05, 2005 7:17 pm
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attempt to appear older by cussing and speaking of "mature" things glitter and all that shit in the…Fri Jun 03, 2005 3:20 pm -
have you ever felt the rough edge of society let it cut through your skin and you love the pain and…Fri Jun 03, 2005 12:17 pm -
Please just kill this thing. I wouldnt mind some advice on the structure either. I just want to die…Thu Jun 02, 2005 4:05 am -
Very nice written... Good images, very well thought. yeah, who rearranges the puzzle so that it is …Thu Jun 02, 2005 2:02 am -
Wow. This poem really didn't seem like you. Don't ask if that's good or bad because you know me...a…Thu Jun 02, 2005 1:51 am -
In the darkest time of twenty-four hours, His name is carved in a cement wall. Sweaty palms with vi…Wed Jun 01, 2005 4:54 pm -
Mmm.. I like this. A lot. It's so true.. You've been able to capture what I haven't: the real feeli…Tue May 31, 2005 5:21 pm -
it's grey, peppery coughs hacking through the fleshy night. my hot, white light pierces my eyes and…Tue May 31, 2005 12:04 pm -
you are a lovesaint bless my soul with divine influence or stab it with crossed knives my fate is o…Mon May 30, 2005 6:06 pm -
i woke up with you in my arms with a smile as wide as you on my face. do you remember when i won yo…Sat May 28, 2005 4:09 pm -
She went on a journey of self discovery, Hiding herself from all those she knew, Afraid of what she…Sat May 28, 2005 4:04 pm -
***i suppose it's sort of a story in a poem in a story in a poem*** frilled dresses look so pretty …Sat May 28, 2005 3:58 pm -
The Curse of Mortality Some day we’ll all take out last breath, And allow life to succumb to death.…Sat May 28, 2005 3:34 pm
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As I wait here Waiting for someone to come back And tell me that I’m loved That I’m still alive Tha…Sat May 28, 2005 5:16 am -
Hm. I got it and I liked up until this part! Agh! "Don’t wave those white flag just yet don’t let i…Fri May 27, 2005 4:48 am -
****i figured i'd stick a rating on this baby, since it's about drugs, but it doesn't have any lang…Fri May 27, 2005 12:00 am -
i hide my eyes behind thin strips of dried-out hair that filter the world yet they're the only crys…Wed May 25, 2005 9:14 am -
when it all falls down like an emotional waterfall a cornucopia of drowning dreams and all you have…Tue May 24, 2005 10:47 pm
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