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I know something is wrong with this poem. I just cant figure it out. Will you give me suggestions? …Thu Nov 17, 2005 1:22 pm -
As I wait on the bench, my arms handcuffed As I look around the dark room, shivering I begin to thi…Wed Nov 16, 2005 9:30 pm -
:( I thought this was going to be happy, dammit! Anyway, it's good. I like it better than many of y…Wed Nov 16, 2005 2:01 pm -
A beam of light Searches the night As a stalker Silently creeps I hide behind a shed I see yellow o…Tue Nov 15, 2005 10:14 pm -
Guys please could you post your thoughts and any comments on this. Thanks a lot! :lol: Outside, nig…Mon Nov 14, 2005 9:15 pm -
oh wow, very powerful imagery and choice of words... casts a lot of coinciding emotions to the read…Mon Nov 14, 2005 7:57 pm -
*I wrote this when I was eleven in italy it's one of my only decent poems from that time. Just wond…Mon Nov 14, 2005 4:23 pm -
For one to know is not always for one to find out.The never ending secret and the never ending lies…Sun Nov 13, 2005 7:15 pm -
The crops in the fields sway, As I walk through, lost in thought, I hear the creatures at the end o…Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:44 am -
Wide and Quaking Blue Mention something In painless prose To remind me who she’s wandering away fro…Sat Nov 12, 2005 10:22 pm -
ooooo....crows... I really enjoyed this one hon, I'd do a more indepth critique but I'm pressed for…Sat Nov 12, 2005 4:28 pm -
"Dead Cat's Dead" We used to think that the buffet table was free and that whatever we desired from…Sat Nov 12, 2005 6:55 am -
The topic for the competition is "a building." I'm doing this through my school but I thought I'd l…Fri Nov 11, 2005 5:35 pm -
NIGHTFALL The dusky sky is turning blacker, Bright stars are coming out. The blueness is fading awa…Fri Nov 11, 2005 9:00 am -
Today was not meant to take you away. We did not know it would come. We did not see you vanishing i…Fri Nov 11, 2005 5:51 am -
This doesn't exactly spin me in the air at several hundred miles per hour and then dump me in some …Thu Nov 10, 2005 1:40 pm -
It’s stings at the insides of my nose Coarse, stagnant scent Desert(ion) of red A place in half-emp…Thu Nov 10, 2005 12:20 pm -
BATTLE The clanging of swords, The beating of drums, The chanting of men, The killing of hopes. The…Wed Nov 09, 2005 12:24 am -
I wrote this a like a year ago. There's parts I like, (mostly the beginning) and there are other pa…Tue Nov 08, 2005 4:39 pm -
The moment you were hurt, the warmth Was gone With your song. Soon the chills of bitterness Come cr…Tue Nov 08, 2005 12:26 am -
-force be with you Padawan- the one armed Yoda hangs from the table chained to my keys his eyes clo…Tue Nov 08, 2005 12:12 am -
I just wrote this a second ago. I was in a melancholy mood... Any comments? :wink: AT THE WINDOW I …Mon Nov 07, 2005 10:07 pm -
She speaks with every woman's mouth, bending words and wisdom love hides underneath pressed linen i…Mon Nov 07, 2005 3:13 pm -
*Left now*Sun Nov 06, 2005 9:19 pm -
the kid with the gun is my neighbor the two-colored eye man watches over the domain of the 3-legged…Sun Nov 06, 2005 8:05 pm -
Oh wow that was sad....it had a really good flow though.Sat Nov 05, 2005 6:24 pm -
Simple women should Simply keep their Bony knees drawn tightly. Simple men should Simply keep their…Sat Nov 05, 2005 6:22 pm -
Come with me to a place far away Where the birds sing as the music plays, Walk with me as the spark…Fri Nov 04, 2005 7:22 pm -
"We shall go on to the end ... we shall never surrender" - Winston Churchill spare a minute for the…Fri Nov 04, 2005 4:40 am -
::a few things to forget:: add water to the ocean just to watch it go again turning into rain found…Fri Nov 04, 2005 4:28 am -
I washed up with the early morning tides, Braided hair like coarse leather. Dressed in seaweed and …Fri Nov 04, 2005 4:14 am -
There is a place, far, far away, I drink from the waters when drowning in pain. All of my grief was…Thu Nov 03, 2005 7:05 pm -
but when it's the end of the world do you think we'll have a reason to live? I used to read you lik…Thu Nov 03, 2005 5:44 pm -
Glistening stars in the sky Reflect in your glittering eyes. Your breath so warm As you hold me tig…Wed Nov 02, 2005 11:48 pm -
Trying to slit my throat with a pin But look where it’s getting me. All that came of my dowsing wit…Wed Nov 02, 2005 2:46 pm -
I'LL KILL YOU IF YOU READ THIS. The Nun I STRANGLED WITH MY BARE HANDS Her name was Julia, she love…Wed Nov 02, 2005 2:45 pm -
Everyday is a brand new day I remind myself of that all the time So why do I keep doing the same th…Wed Nov 02, 2005 1:12 am -
Fear Heartbeat, running Fleeing from a fear I Cannot see Silence which sears my Terrified soul Dark…Tue Nov 01, 2005 9:36 pm -
This is a song as well as a poem. But I figured it would get more attention being posted here. It m…Tue Nov 01, 2005 4:34 pm -
I aughtn't to like you God I aught to hate your fucking guts. You've wrecked my life Killed my dad …Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:28 am -
Amazing thing evolution: Man may now walk upright, But he still speaks Like a fucking Neanderthal.Mon Oct 31, 2005 4:14 pm -
Pregnancy is to ear infection; Both take a miniscule of bacteria Once inplanted, causes panic and h…Mon Oct 31, 2005 4:02 pm -
I know it was about death but I wouldn't consider it "emo" but it was really really heartbreaking a…Mon Oct 31, 2005 12:26 am -
I liked the last stanza, but that was about it. I never understand your poetry anymore...I used to …Sun Oct 30, 2005 10:40 pm -
This is a little poem I had to do in my Language Arts class. I hope you like. :P Times of sorrow Fe…Sat Oct 29, 2005 6:10 pm -
Life is like a path you walk down to get home Sometimes you walk with others Sometimes you walk alo…Sat Oct 29, 2005 5:01 pm -
Jane Doe #21532323 lies naked on the table before us. Her eyes are closed, the coroner explains, be…Sat Oct 29, 2005 3:50 am -
:P p.s. R-heehee What blasphemy is this- that rattles the earth's core the dogs howl, and cats meow…Sat Oct 29, 2005 3:37 am -
In a dark little world All my own I am lost without a purporse I am all alone Sometimes to others I…Sat Oct 29, 2005 3:33 am -
Keep a distance don't get too attached, That is a rule for living. No matter where you all go Every…Fri Oct 28, 2005 9:34 am
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