Clean Up Your Mess

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Nameless_And_Shamed
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:00 am
Nameless_And_Shamed says... · Mon Oct 31, 2005 1:00 am
Simple women should
Simply keep their
Bony knees drawn tightly.
Simple men should
Simply keep their
Fat mouths drawn tightly.
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Chevy
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Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:09 pm
Chevy says... · Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:09 pm
Um...whoa. I don't really know the point of this but um...is there a point?
when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.
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Angel17
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Tue Nov 01, 2005 3:36 pm
Angel17 says... · Tue Nov 01, 2005 3:36 pm
This poem makes the reader think
Real poetry are those with the best words in the best order

~~~~~~~~Mandy~~~~~~~~~
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Twinkling Starz
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Wed Nov 02, 2005 11:15 am
Twinkling Starz says... · Wed Nov 02, 2005 11:15 am
I don't know, but it's cute. Good work.
*~*Shining through the dark black night...Twinkling Starz*~*
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timjim77
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Sat Nov 05, 2005 6:22 pm
timjim77 says... · Sat Nov 05, 2005 6:22 pm
Hmm. Provocative. The simplicity gives a nice backdrop for the emotion. nice work.
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