"Maybe" The feeling(s) I face everyday.

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Everyday is a brand new day
I remind myself of that all the time
So why do I keep doing the same thing over and over

I make promises all the time
But I never keep them
So why do I even bother making them

I break so easily
That it’s not even funny

So right now I’m gonna make a plan
I’m gonna go somewhere
Somewhere no one has ever been
Gonna claim it all as It comes
Don’t exactly know why
But it all sounds like a good plan to me

Not quite sure if I’ll pull through and do it all
But maybe if I’m lucky I’ll pull through just this once
And do it all like I said I would.

Maybe today is the day I’ve been looking for
And everything will turn around for the better.

Or is this all just a fantasy I have that is dying to be a reality?

*Note* I would really appreciate it if whoever reads this leaves there thoughts on it.
Thanks,
Christina
"You can't change a person, but you can influence them."




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This poem will really relate to many people. Some times i feel like i'm not going anywhere, and everything is so predictable. Anyway, your poem is good and the reader can relate. :)
Real poetry are those with the best words in the best order

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Hey thanks for the feedback! :)
"You can't change a person, but you can influence them."



The simple truth is that authors like making people squirm. If this weren't the case, all novels would be filled completely with cute bunnies having birthday parties.
— Brandon Sanderson, Alcatraz Versus the Evil Librarians