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There's a place where all My toughts flow A Place where all My feelings manage to go A Waistland de…Wed Dec 07, 2005 9:41 pm -
The title was rather appropiate...thanks for not naming it "I know what it tastes like". I liked "N…Wed Dec 07, 2005 4:08 am -
12-04-05 Cursed is he who does not believe in calmness, for he shan't learn the error of his ways k…Tue Dec 06, 2005 9:35 pm -
I can't help looking at you, but when you look at me I turn away. I feel so shy when I catch your e…Tue Dec 06, 2005 1:22 am -
I was just standing there, Feeling the suns heat, Then I saw you, And my heart skipped a beat. I fe…Tue Dec 06, 2005 1:02 am -
I missed u today Decided to call. You picked up, Said nothing at all. The other night, Was all my f…Mon Dec 05, 2005 10:11 pm -
I watched dirt roads wrap themselves around the world and then around your fingers, hoping it would…Mon Dec 05, 2005 5:23 pm -
I'm the guy whose always standing out, I'm the guy you just can't figure out, I'm the whose heart f…Mon Dec 05, 2005 4:06 am -
Fly like an eagle,swim like a fish Take me on your journey, so I can leave this rubbish Take me to …Mon Dec 05, 2005 1:50 am -
I stood in the hall, Waiting for class to start, When your beauty caught my gaze, You smelt of swee…Sun Dec 04, 2005 12:23 pm -
Best Friends? You say you’re my friend, You say you’re my pal, But then you ran away, When I needed…Sat Dec 03, 2005 3:21 pm -
In the last few seconds before a winter sunset dies there is warmth inside and coldness out; my han…Sat Dec 03, 2005 2:47 pm -
It's interesting as a thought provoking piece. Yet, I have to challenge it. Maybe where you live 9/…Sat Dec 03, 2005 4:37 am -
Happy Birthday Brad! I liked this, it was honestly a very beautiful piece. You never sieze to amaze…Sat Dec 03, 2005 12:00 am -
It is not a normal pain that you feel when you lose her. It is not natural, not feigned. It cuts de…Fri Dec 02, 2005 9:32 pm -
As blood runs through my veins, I can hear the beating of my heart.. Chained to the voices I hear a…Fri Dec 02, 2005 6:07 pm -
So bitter is the end So bitter it tastes like sugar Through tears and blur you stare And darkness s…Fri Dec 02, 2005 6:02 pm -
Days pass, Time flies. Flowers bloom, Flowers rot Children smile, Children cry, Children sigh… Peop…Fri Dec 02, 2005 4:01 pm -
Angels in the sky Angels in heaven Angels that fly Angels lucky number seven Angels right beside me…Thu Dec 01, 2005 2:24 pm -
Golden dust motes, In a glimmering cascade in the air, From the stained glass windows, The light sp…Wed Nov 30, 2005 7:25 am -
Winter ice on your unsheathed knife frozen blood and frozen tears newly spilt, so young and brittle…Tue Nov 29, 2005 8:11 pm -
Jack is to blame for this, I just read perfection and was inspired...so yeah all your fault, Jack, …Tue Nov 29, 2005 3:13 am -
With blue braids tipped foam-green and skin the shine of the sea she glides between the caps and wa…Mon Nov 28, 2005 8:45 pm -
the never bird gave up her nest to save a boy so keen on single destruction death seemed like a ver…Mon Nov 28, 2005 8:25 pm -
You don’t know I’m there, but I’m watching You can’t tell, but I love you more then you know I migh…Mon Nov 28, 2005 5:04 pm -
Serendipity. All the random pieces coming together in one beautiful, enlightened moment. Did you us…Mon Nov 28, 2005 3:15 am -
I like the first two stanzas the best, though I like the whole poem. Yep...Sun Nov 27, 2005 2:38 am -
Wow...I nearly cried reading this...I know I've said that good handful of times before concerning y…Sat Nov 26, 2005 4:18 pm -
Your eyes Are now small and watery, Bubbling with energy and excitement, As you take you very first…Sat Nov 26, 2005 9:12 am -
okaaaaaaaay...sorry I shouldn't have posted at all I don't have any other comment but that.Sat Nov 26, 2005 6:48 am -
Her laughter's a distracter, As you look into her eyes. She's quick to say hello But terrible with …Sat Nov 26, 2005 6:32 am -
The past’s-elastic is fraying And I find that I’m guilty, When my crimes have a face That stares ba…Fri Nov 25, 2005 12:28 am -
It's very strange how I feel nothing for you anymore how I can touch you, taste you but not love yo…Thu Nov 24, 2005 6:36 pm -
Darn, Brad...when did you start writing like this? Darkness is daylight–At least loneliness isn’t p…Thu Nov 24, 2005 4:33 pm -
"Love" paints a picture Of flowers and light, But to this strong emotion Is a darker side. Pain and…Tue Nov 22, 2005 3:04 pm -
For you I will write a song and sing it, I love you, I admit it. You are a dream come true I could …Tue Nov 22, 2005 5:22 am -
It's amazing how you can make me crumble without saying a word Your love consists of hate and I can…Mon Nov 21, 2005 6:28 pm -
No extra words, no extra lines. Excellent descriptions, excellent prose.Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:49 am -
from lancaster they came the class of '45 fiery demons with wings and sharp tails did you see their…Mon Nov 21, 2005 9:48 am -
A quiet attraction so platonic not so innocent uneasiness engulfs me the knowledge of no mutual fee…Mon Nov 21, 2005 3:32 am -
If I were to see myself as you see me I would be an ugly thing. I would be a reflection of words an…Sun Nov 20, 2005 10:30 am -
he has us all colour-coded in yellow-metal-ring binders filed under last name and cashspending hobb…Sat Nov 19, 2005 11:53 am -
foliage - where are you? hidden beneath the concrete tremor only cement cracks show a shade of gree…Sat Nov 19, 2005 11:52 am -
Sylvia If you look through the dipping boughs of the elm trees you can see the glittering patches o…Sat Nov 19, 2005 11:48 am -
I would really, really, really like everyone's comments. Good and bad. My Road Here I am, alone I w…Sat Nov 19, 2005 10:01 am -
Thank god Brad for knocking some sense into me on this one. Well I've messed around with it some mo…Fri Nov 18, 2005 6:28 pm -
Indigo Children I arousal Indigo Children of Tarturus painted dark with holy inscriptions what has …Fri Nov 18, 2005 6:25 pm -
Why is there no delete button? Don't like this poem. so I wanted to get rid of it.Fri Nov 18, 2005 12:14 pm -
Ugh.Fri Nov 18, 2005 11:54 am -
I traced my fingers around your body but you never wanted to be called a masterpiece, You don't mea…Thu Nov 17, 2005 8:08 pm
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