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Poppi · 2005-10-28T09:24:44Z

I aughtn't to like you God I aught to hate your fucking guts. You've wrecked my life Killed my dad You're killing my sister. I'd talk to someone else that wasn't you But there is no one else who sits At the switchboard of life and death Pulling out plugs and smashing modems Turning switches on and off Connecting wires and dragging programs apart You can't just lose faith if you have it... It's like having a stalker that walks behind you He follows me around And it's faith I hate not you Because I aught to hate you But I've never been too reasonable. You're not exactly helping me out right now But maybe it's just a test And in case you hadn't noticed All this trouble is getting in the way of my mocks Which I shall undoubtedly fail Which shall be your fault. But I still won't hate you...

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Mon Oct 31, 2005 5:47 pm

Poppi says... · Mon Oct 31, 2005 5:47 pm

Thanks loads

It's a pretty odd poem I must admit

Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...

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Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:15 pm

Chevy says... · Mon Oct 31, 2005 8:15 pm

Even though I didn't agree with the poem, I thought it was very heart-felt and it wa good how you stirred away from cliches for the most part.

Very well done.

when there's nowhere to go, it's time to grow up.

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Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:28 am

Poppi says... · Tue Nov 01, 2005 8:28 am

Thanks

(just out of interest - what was it exactly you disagree with?)

Martyr of Banality... such a joy in life... such happiness... such a desire to just implode...

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No one is perfect; not even your reflection.
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