The Ghost of Corporate Future

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ConvolutedEmpty
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Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:55 pm
ConvolutedEmpty says... · Sun Nov 13, 2005 8:55 pm
oh wow, very powerful imagery and choice of words... casts a lot of coinciding emotions to the reader; I would not change a thing...

although... you might want to...

But I ca't find anything less than great about it, beautiful writing!
Words are spilling out like endless rain into a paper cup, they slither while they pass. They slip away across the universe... Pools of sorrow, waves of joy are drifting thorough my open mind possessing and caressing me..
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Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:02 pm
Firestarter says... · Mon Nov 14, 2005 5:02 pm
Lovin' it.
Nate wrote:And if YWS ever does become a company, Jack will be the President of European Operations. In fact, I'm just going to call him that anyways.
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Mon Nov 14, 2005 7:57 pm
emotion_less says... · Mon Nov 14, 2005 7:57 pm
The ending made me sad :(, but yeah, nice job.
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