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i wrote this yesterday, and i just wanted to get everyones thoughts on it The bars of the jail cell…Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:50 pm -

So I found this on an old jumpdrive and I thought you guys might help me clean it up a bit. I fully…Mon Nov 30, 2009 2:55 am -
So I have wanted to write a fantasy book for ages. My 1st book wasn't fantasy though i stupidly put…Mon Nov 30, 2009 12:21 am -

for the 'Imagine' contest- please review!Sun Nov 29, 2009 4:42 pm -

This is my very first fantasy entry, and, I think, first fantasy piece I've written. This is only t…Sat Nov 28, 2009 7:18 am -

Ok, so this is just the beginning (and first draft) of a stroy that I'm writing. I came up with the…Fri Nov 27, 2009 1:11 pm -

The following is the prologue to a story I would like to write, I have never written any fantasy bu…Tue Nov 24, 2009 7:26 pm -
The Spiritual Assassination of George H.W. Bush Part One: The Murder Former President George W. Bus…Mon Nov 23, 2009 8:43 pm -

Please Reply!!!!! Most my friends really like it, but I would like other opinions.... =-D Please an…Mon Nov 23, 2009 6:21 pm -

Every fairy tale story has to have its distressed female waiting for her Knight in Shining Armor to…Sun Nov 22, 2009 3:01 am -

So this is my book that i have been working on, called TigerGate. This is just the prologue. I figu…Sun Nov 22, 2009 2:26 am -

This is a Chapter from the book I'm writing; Wolf Heart.Sun Nov 22, 2009 1:50 am -

Chaptter numero 2! It's pretty short. You basically need to read chapter 1 to know what's going on.…Tue Nov 17, 2009 3:07 pm -
Well after I checked it all for grammar, and got someone to edit for me here it is, 1 The screams w…Tue Nov 17, 2009 12:49 pm -

CHAPTER II Aballa I hate myself! I have caused this horrible pain, in two people! Ugh! Did I always…Mon Nov 16, 2009 5:48 am -

Hey, its IR here. Here's an interesting little short story i wrote on a whim. I hope you like it an…Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:38 pm -

My fingers scraped against skin, as I literally tried clawing myself back towards the light. “Aiden…Sun Nov 15, 2009 4:33 pm -

It was in a place not so much darker than the place prior to. This of which I speak was by some to …Sun Nov 15, 2009 5:15 am -

This is my second time writing this story. Basically the first time I left way too much out and got…Sun Nov 15, 2009 2:38 am -

Description is an art, I think I forgot how to paint. =_=Tue Nov 10, 2009 5:02 pm -

This is for ThornedRose's (Ellie's) contest, so it's extremely terrible. There's no need to review …Thu Nov 05, 2009 8:53 pm -

I've wrote and looked over it several times now it's your turn to critique! :shock: "This is it. We…Tue Nov 03, 2009 11:04 pm -

Locked Blue Eyes, Black DragonThere was a voice in his head, telling him something...Tue Nov 03, 2009 9:53 pm -

Note: This is something I had to do for my English Lit. It had to be a short story of 750 words, so…Tue Nov 03, 2009 5:41 pm -
Page 1 Mandy was so exited, because when she got home it would be a few minutes till she got ready …Tue Nov 03, 2009 2:17 pm -

Arya Poisonhold stepped off the dock and laid her hand on the hilt of her sword. Unlike most girls …Mon Nov 02, 2009 1:38 am -

PART 1 ---------------- Brea was in the middle of the highway again, screaming with one hand shield…Mon Nov 02, 2009 1:13 am -

Hi - I posted the first draft of this introduction to my first novel, I have taken the criticisms i…Sat Oct 31, 2009 8:52 pm -

Locked Snow White QueenHow much would you be willing to suffer for true love?Fri Oct 30, 2009 10:55 am -

Hi guys, I wrote this quite a while ago for an English assignment, and I got an A+ yay me!, so I th…Fri Oct 30, 2009 3:44 am -
Here is my story everybody, I'm new here and am looking for some constructive criticism on my work.…Wed Oct 28, 2009 4:24 pm -

I apologize if it seems rather long! I couldn't get everything in i wanted to in a little piece... …Wed Oct 28, 2009 2:39 am -
In winters ,2003. their was a cold snow falling, there lived a boy called Edwin with his family, he…Mon Oct 26, 2009 7:29 pm -

Very end of my book, please read and review ^^Sat Oct 24, 2009 11:49 am -
I had to remove the story due to contest regulations, sorry.Sat Oct 24, 2009 12:40 am -

The guild: A Cavern of ice Why did I take this damn job? The chilling cold rippled inside the froze…Thu Oct 22, 2009 3:44 am -

So this is the opening of a story of mine that needs some help from you people. If anyone's interes…Wed Oct 21, 2009 5:49 pm -
The night was thick and cold. I knew I had wandered too far. The forest surrounded me for miles in …Wed Oct 21, 2009 5:28 am -

It was a chilly, quiet evening in the highway to Ramgarh, a Rajasthani village. Evenings and nights…Mon Oct 19, 2009 10:44 am -

Magic and Paranormal Crime and Punishment Division - The Lab of Universes CONFIDENTIAL - UNAUTHORIS…Sat Oct 17, 2009 3:32 am -

First story in a long time. I need some feedback please! It started out with a dream. We never imag…Sat Oct 17, 2009 1:41 am -

First of all,I'm sorry the title is pathetic in the extreme but it was all I could come up with spu…Fri Oct 16, 2009 9:56 pm -

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This is the prologue to a random idea of mine. Tell me what you think. ---- He was always there. In…Sun Oct 11, 2009 9:05 pm -

Good day Chaps! i started writing this story for an english assignment, it was supposed to be a fan…Thu Oct 08, 2009 3:56 pm -

OK, so I've posted some of Glimmer before, and you guys left me good comments and critiques and I b…Wed Oct 07, 2009 12:49 am -

I think this is the first short story I've ever written just because... Any who, feel free to be ha…Tue Oct 06, 2009 5:18 pm -

This I wrote about me and Gsppcrocks10. We're buddies. And this was made for fun. I've been reading…Tue Oct 06, 2009 3:01 pm -

The Silver-Light Theory He dived his feather-pen into the small bowl of dark-black ink. Mr. Silver-…Sun Oct 04, 2009 7:07 pm
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