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THE WOLFKIN By a Giraffe Chapter One The Awakening A young boy stumbled through the forest as a pac…Fri Oct 02, 2009 7:56 am -
Oblivious to the world, the hunter lay motionless. His breathes were relaxed and even, confirming a…Thu Oct 01, 2009 7:37 pm -

Swoosh, and it was gone. A silver flash raced through the dark forest at incredible speeds, startli…Tue Sep 29, 2009 7:37 pm -

This is the first chapter of a three part series, it starts off kinda slow, sorry. I always knew I …Tue Sep 29, 2009 6:19 am -

Ok, so i think I fixed everything, that needed to be fixed, thank for your comments,here is the new…Fri Sep 25, 2009 7:20 pm -

Hello everyone, well this is my first post and definitely not my last! Well I am try to make this b…Fri Sep 25, 2009 1:23 pm -

This is a short story that I wrote for a collection of short stories that I am writing. I hope you …Wed Sep 23, 2009 8:19 pm -

Critiques harsh and all welcome. I'm looking to improve and improve fast. I especially need some op…Tue Sep 22, 2009 3:03 pm -

Hey all. This is a segment of Twilight Skies which i am deciding whether or not to keep based on yo…Mon Sep 21, 2009 11:55 am -

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Locked LunaI just realized that this should really be in Fantasy Fiction, so the rest of it is in Action/Adven…Mon Sep 21, 2009 12:28 am -

This was written so late, with me being very tired. It sucks, but it might be better. It's going to…Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:55 pm -

This is my first post in a long time. The story has been in my head for a while now, and this is my…Sun Sep 20, 2009 5:39 pm -

A girl gets trapped in her own dream.Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:32 am -

**The penultimate one ... I think. I was aiming for this to be the last post, but it goes on for a …Fri Sep 18, 2009 3:50 pm -

This is my first post, so please comment on how well you like it. I want to publish it, but I`m not…Wed Sep 16, 2009 8:23 am -

All of this was my fault. How could I have let this happen! I shouldn't have been so careless. Amy …Mon Sep 14, 2009 10:34 pm -

I smell her approach from a few blocks away. Amidst the stench of filth from the slums of the city,…Mon Sep 14, 2009 2:23 pm -

First, there was a faint trace of lemon in the air. Then, she opened her eyes. A bright light stare…Sun Sep 13, 2009 6:39 pm -

Twilight Skies (R13 -Contains coarse language) Chapter 1 “Ali, what is WRONG with you? Care to expl…Sun Sep 13, 2009 2:48 pm -

1- Meet Esther Zehira SabaSat Sep 12, 2009 6:03 pm -

2- Discover what Esther will have to go through from now onSat Sep 12, 2009 2:36 am -
This is the introduction for my novel which will probably be about twenty chapters. BlackHeart is t…Sat Sep 12, 2009 1:53 am -

part of chapter two called fall of jarl-yarlThu Sep 10, 2009 3:21 pm -

**I forgot about the competition. :oops: But due to all the encouragement and great advice I receiv…Wed Sep 09, 2009 3:07 am -

For Amon360's Vamp. Competition. Please review!!Sun Sep 06, 2009 5:46 pm -

Entry for Amon360's Vampire contestSat Sep 05, 2009 6:06 pm -

Feedback. Please. I'm begging you.Fri Sep 04, 2009 12:05 pm -

Dawn was one of Igy’s favorite times of day. Her other favorite time was dusk, because the one thin…Thu Sep 03, 2009 8:14 am -

Hey. Vegans get turned into vampires too, ya know.Wed Sep 02, 2009 12:14 am -

Is there anything I can do to make this more hooking??Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:20 pm -

(Okay, this is a little thing I wrote quite a while back. Its raw and I don't think I've edited it …Tue Sep 01, 2009 5:27 pm -

a vampire story set in the middle agesMon Aug 31, 2009 9:50 pm -

Entry For ThornedRose's ContestSat Aug 29, 2009 1:29 pm -

Part ThreeFri Aug 28, 2009 4:10 am -

She looked beautiful even as she died. The wind rustled her hair; blowing up behind her it seemed a…Fri Aug 28, 2009 2:51 am -
my chapter 2..i've introduced some of the other main characters here..please feel free to critique.…Wed Aug 26, 2009 12:15 pm -

My entry for Amon360's vampire contest. Rated R for violence. All critiques are welcome, especially…Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:55 am -
hi everyone..this is my very first post here..and this is also the very first novel i'm working on.…Tue Aug 25, 2009 4:27 am -

you know you want to review :)Mon Aug 24, 2009 9:42 pm -

Entry for OverEasy 'Once Upon A Time' contestMon Aug 24, 2009 8:13 pm -

Chapter 1 and 2.Mon Aug 24, 2009 2:50 pm -
It is a sample piece of a book I'm writingMon Aug 24, 2009 2:42 pm -

1,667 words including BBCodes, so I guess it's not too overwhelming. Right! I wasn't sure if this s…Mon Aug 24, 2009 1:33 pm -

chapter three - ClashSun Aug 16, 2009 7:16 pm -

Working title, PrologueSun Aug 16, 2009 3:19 pm -

Entry for the 'Which Path to Take' contest!Sat Aug 15, 2009 11:45 pm -

For Rosey's contestSat Aug 15, 2009 11:25 pm -

For the "Once Upon a Time" contestSat Aug 15, 2009 9:49 pm -

For the Once Upon a Time contestSat Aug 15, 2009 6:43 pm
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