I looked at the sky
but saw nothing except emptiness,
just like my heart.
I looked at the moon
and saw your beautiful face in it.
Days passed,
yet I still didn't know
how badly I wanted to see you.
When I sit alone,
I remember the moments we laughed together,
the moments we cried together.
My eyes blur,
my heart cries
like a sky without its clouds.
I'd burn the whole world for you
if I had to,
but promise me
you'll walk with me on it.
If I'd known
it would end like this,
I would never have let myself
fall for you.
When will it be?
I see you again
I'll run to you with my bare foot,
even if it's raining.
I'll look into your gorgeous eyes,
wrap my arms around you,
and say in my breathless voice,
"I missed you."
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@ sladesheppard how is it?
I'm just now reading it.And I'm crying because of you. I HATE YOU (jk,I love you like a friend)
Aww thank you dude i love you too( like a friend hehe) don't cry mann
How can I not when it's reminding me of her so well.
Mann!! Ahh its ok man just cry then
I just sent it to my home Gmail.
Aww. Am glad my friend
I'm crying so hard right now.Ugh,why are feelings like this.
My eyes blur,
my heart cries
like a sky without its clouds.
I'd burn the whole world for you
My heart has been crying for so long.And I actually did swear to burn the whole world for her.
If I'd known
it would end like this,
I would never have let myself
fall for you.
Don't know if I would of ever fell for her if I hadn't been complaining about my hip.But even if I had known I would of still fell for her.
Aww. (I'll probably be stalking all of your work 🤞🤭)
I loved how real this is.
Just the fact that you bring the emotion so well is captivating.
This was by far my favorite quote. It's so real and true. For a hopeless romantic, (like me), I would think like this if I knew that the person I truly love would be gone I probably would've never wanted to love someone. It's the fact of losing them that's horrible.
~Jaye.
Aww tq.* blushing *
I'm also a hopeless romantic but I wouldn't think that I wouldn't not want to love someone because of it,most of all if it was my fault that I lost contact with them.
Damn