People started asking for coffee without milk,
yet somehow, they forgot
that milk was the one
that softened its bitterness.
Coffee fell in love with milk
and asked it to mix into its darkness.
Milk loved coffee back,
and neither stayed quite the same
after they found each other.
Somehow, people praised the coffee
but never the milk.
No one saw how milk changed its colour for coffee,
or how coffee changed its taste for milk.
Even when people tried to separate them,
coffee never stopped loving milk.
It kept looking for reasons
to stay beside it.
And then there was sugar.
Nobody praised the sugar
for melting into their love,
for making it sweeter
without asking for anything in return.
But coffee and milk noticed.
They watched sugar slowly disappear
just to make their love a little sweeter.
One day, milk asked,
"Why do you keep melting into us
when nobody even notices you?"
Sugar smiled and replied,
"If melting makes you both sweeter,
if it makes you both happy,
then I will keep melting into your love,
even if nobody ever sees me."
But there was someone
sugar never knew about.
A spoon
that had been in love with sugar
from the very beginning.
It never confessed.
It simply stayed quiet,
helping sugar become a part of
the love story it could never have.
And perhaps,
the spoon was a little like me,
loving someone from a distance,
never asking to be loved back,
finding happiness in the smallest things.
Even a glance,
even a passing moment,
was enough to make it smile.
And when the stirring stopped,
a few grains of sugar remained
clinging to the spoon.
The spoon was happy.
Not because sugar had finally loved it,
not because sugar had chosen to stay,
but because, for a little while,
some part of sugar was still with it.
And the cup,
The cup watched everything,
holding their little love stories
within its quiet walls.
It saw the love that stayed,
the love that melted,
and the love that was never spoken.
Yet it kept every secret to itself.
Because perhaps,
some stories are meant to be held
rather than told.
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