what will i lose when i don't cry, what will i have when i cry?
what will i lose when i don't smile, what will i have when i smile?
what will i lose when i don't miss you, what will i have when i miss you?
what will i lose when i don't like you, and what will i have when i like you?
- Me:)
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Good structure, and I personally love the beginning and end.
Short poems like these are always fun to write.
Thank you!!!