The most beautiful creation in the universe
is the human heart.
A place vast enough to hold
the love, memories, dreams,
grief, and hope
all at once.
The human heart is innocent and pure,
not because it has never known pain,
but because it still knows how to love.
Countless feelings drift through it,
settling quietly within.
Human hearts love quickly,
get hurt deeply,
live intensely,
and eventually leave this world
far too soon.
Perhaps they are temporary,
but that is what makes them so beautiful.
Among all the wonders of the cosmos,
nothing is more extraordinary
than a heart that continues to love,
despite knowing how fragile it is...
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Wow. This was beautiful.
I'm not even sure if I have a favorite quote.
I loved this SOOOO much. And I'm such a romantic that this whole poem just felt right.
I also really liked this one. I think that this might be my favorite one.
I like all of the things you make, and hope to read more.
~ Jaye.
Hiihii! I'm Azzy & I'm just going to write a little review on your poem here!
This quote really stands with me because it shows and talks about how the human heart can hold a lot of emotions-- either positive or negative!
This line is awesome! Makes me think about how some people can start off as "good" but can eventually become corrupted and start changing for the worst.
Loved how you worded this! Kinda reminds me the whole 'hopeless romantic' concept!
Again, worded so nicely!
Basically, this poem was amazing and I loved everything about it! Have a lovely day and keep writing! <33
Thank you!! Check my other poems too